rate_review Reviews

An amazingly hot fic.
i shall FAP HARD!!!!

Well, this wasn't the first adult fanfict I've read but yours was too good to pass up to review and when I say good, I mean good in both writing and lemon way! The title caught my eye, the summary did too. All it took was a little bit of devilish temptation and I read it. All three chapters. Really amazing, especially even in the lemon scenes you actually made the story move along. Oh and I love girl-on-girl. I've got nothing on yaoi; I just won't read it! Yes so, all in all it was really a very sweet, lemony treat!

Wow... just wow... i could'nt have asked for anything better! but i have to say you are quite the tease! eagerly awaiting chapter 3 and up!

Holy shit! That last update put a smile on my face.

All I can say to describe the 3rd chapter is marvelous. Absolutely marvelous.

Bravo, fellow author. Bravo. XD

Miyuutsuu.

P.S: Clair's eye's are teal.

WIN! this has got to be the best Pokemon lemon in history!

Well well...what do we have here?

A really good story. This one, I got a good feeling that it's gonna be one for the ages.

Especially if the next chapter is what I think it is. XD

Plotwise: very good. details are not little nor too much. Just right.

Character interaction: What else I can say other than 'kick ass."

Overall: a definite ten.

I'll keep my eyes on this. Later!

Miyuutsuu