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October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
... You astound me! Such a perfect preface for a story. And yet....
You just let this one die. Be honest! And so I have a request;
Would you allow me to use this preface to add depth to one of my own? I swear I won't use it if you say no! Pretty Please with sugerlumps on top?
... sorry for being nosy... I'll shut up now XD
Yours sincerely
Henryjamesthefifth
(eagerly awaiting a reply, hint hint ;)
You just let this one die. Be honest! And so I have a request;
Would you allow me to use this preface to add depth to one of my own? I swear I won't use it if you say no! Pretty Please with sugerlumps on top?
... sorry for being nosy... I'll shut up now XD
Yours sincerely
Henryjamesthefifth
(eagerly awaiting a reply, hint hint ;)
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February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like the intro to the story, you leave a lot open for plot purposes. Nice writing style, solid spelling/punctuation. I do hope you continue, even though the story hasn't been touched in a couple years. If it's 'dead in the water' to you, maybe put it up for adoptions with whatever notes you had?
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved he incredible amount of detail, its a shame there are no other chapter's though I was really looking forward to how Shinji being Androgenus would play out
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far i wish i could read more i was only disappointed that this was the only chapter
only thing i can think of to improve it is make it wee bit more detailed
love it
only thing i can think of to improve it is make it wee bit more detailed
love it
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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really love the preface id like to see what this story could evolve to. Raelax
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September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has to be the weirdest thing that I have ever read!
I’m willing to stick with it for a few chapters to see how it turns out.
One thing that I noticed, is that your formatting needs more spaces where appropriate. I have noticed this problem with other stories and am beginning to wonder if it has something to do with the site editor. What I have done is save the document as HTML. It still looks a little weird but at least my formatting doesn’t get blown away.
Dale (AKA 94saturn)
I’m willing to stick with it for a few chapters to see how it turns out.
One thing that I noticed, is that your formatting needs more spaces where appropriate. I have noticed this problem with other stories and am beginning to wonder if it has something to do with the site editor. What I have done is save the document as HTML. It still looks a little weird but at least my formatting doesn’t get blown away.
Dale (AKA 94saturn)
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well it's unique. Hell, it seems to have a plot...which is rare for this site. I guess since Shinji is a androgyne that that means that Rei is too. I wonder what other changes are in store. I look forward to this Mr. Ikari.
Read ya Later.
Read ya Later.
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting concept. Should be fun to see what happens to Shinji. I hope you bring Rei in this story somehow. Looking forward to more.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome start. Keep up the good work.
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