rate_review Reviews

Wonderful story, thank you for sharing.

That was awesome. I loved the inside look into the character's minds. There was definitely much hotness as well. :D You did an awesome job. Loved it!

Fantastic work! Kept me happy the whole way!

Well my only criticism is that I don't see Akhito being able to break one of the Yakuza's ribs. Otherwise, very hot and in character! I liked the lion imagery a lot.

wow ! Pretty good story ! Love your writting...
I hope you are going to win the contest !! Yet, there are a lot of good stories but your "lemon" is something ^^.................... Thanks for sharing !

This Fanfiction is very well written and I liked it much to read it.
But I TRULY love it for Tabaka. I think this was probably the first Fiction I ever read (and I desperately search for such Fics. So I know some Viewfinder Fiction.) in which somebody (YOU and I’m deeply grateful [damn… what would Lenin say^^°°°] for it) makes Tabaka cool.
Cool and snappy. Just… perfect.
I definitely read more than enough Fics in which he is dumb und stupid.
Maybe it’s childish so say, but you made my day! Really^^
Finally, someone give Tabaka back his pride! (Strike!!!)
Of course, Asami is an arrogant Asshole but he has taste. I wouldn’t want Tabaka if he wasn’t - at least in some way - a challenge.
And I must admit I see Tabaka as much more as just in some way challenging. However, that is only my personal fondness for this character.
But for one thing, I’m sure, Tabaka is not the stupid creature too much FanficWriters make out of him.
You did better. A much, much better Job.
Wonderful Story and adorable characterization.
Thankyou^^