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I love this so much, author. I love this fic.. i love the use of the developed characters and your portrayal of Kenshin.. Its amazing.
please write more.

Wow, did this story make me smile. I think Kaoru's personality in this is spot on. It is so deliciously first-person that it comes across as the perfect fantasy. The setting is a little spotty in the middle--I'm not entirely sure where it's supposed to happen, but it lends further credibility to this as a pure fantasy. No one bothers to think of the details when they're that absorbed in such a hot little vision. Using the sword to cut her bindings is something that I have never seen in a fic before, so I really appreciated the creativity of it. I'm not sure Kenshin would do such a thing due to his past (no spoilers!) but in a fantasy, anything goes, and again, the idea is really quite creative. I laughed out loud at the end. Please keep writing--it seems to me you have a keen insight into your characters and can write effectively in first-person perspective, something that many authors cannot claim.

I'm not gonna lie to you, your fic was the first Rurouni Kenshin fic I could actually read it til the end. It really captured Kaoru's personalitty. I totally think she would fantasize like this.
Grammar was perfect, Characters right on!
Great job!

I have to say that the ending has me laughing. Kaoru is truly naughty. I love it!

Hahahahaha... That ending is so hilarious! You did a great job! I commend you for coming up with such an ingenious idea.... the length was perfect, so no worries! Personally I find first point of view sex descriptions a total turn on, and much more involving than the usual outside perspective. I don't know... it's like someone is telling you their own personal story. I did the same for my Full Metal Panic! fanfic, which you can find here or at FanFiction.net if you're interested. Anyway... amazing. Keep up the great work.