rate_review Reviews

I must say that I normally don't review many stories. However, I always make exceptions in the case of exceptional work. You write very well and I greatly enjoyed your work. This is far and away one of the best stories I've ever read in regards to keeping in the boundaries of possible character actions. With many stories it seems like motive is incidental, mainly serving as a flimsy pretext to allow for...ahem "content." This is not the case, at least in my humble opinion, with your story. Kyon's thoughts seem spot on for the character. Clever works like this are the reason I keep reading fanfic. Thank you for sharing.

Oho! Very nice how you incorporated the events from the books. It is rare to see people well-versed in the books. *nodnod*

It is rare to have a story having me laughing the whole time through it. You captured Kyon's personality perfectly, even during the more...intimate scenes. I could not help but think that that is what he would really do in that situation. And Haruhi was damn near spot on, also. I had no qualms about her personality, and loved the fact that she had to submit to Kyon. xD I also loved Kyon's reaction to what Nagato had to do. I almost fell out of my seat whenever I read that part. Hilarious!!

Very well-written. It is exceedingly rare for me to encounter a story with little to no errors in grammar and/or punctuation and word usage. I almost felt like I was really reading the books there for a second. Nothing but Grade A++ material there.

-Narshe "Dizzy Gear" Delvar-

At last! A citrusy, well written piece of Haruhi fandom. Loved it all the more simply because of the particular view we were given into Kyon's head...an interesting way to play off of ponytail moe.

i created an account just so that i can tell you that i loved the story and hope that you write more kyonxharuhi stories. thanks