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No no no no no bad Vash! Vash would never do that to any woman you made him a bit OOC there. He may be a pervert but he's not THAT perverted he'd respect her more than that. However despite the random lax of character judgement on Vash's part another good chapter keep it up it seems promising.

Okay this isn't a flame it's a constructive suggestion *smile* when we have problems with our writing we go back and watch the series (we rent various episodes from hastings or netflicks) or read the manga... unfortunately Af is on a work machine most nights when we read and my machine can't up;oad either (some firewall glitch with the network) so we have four chapters and 8 stories waiting on our home machines working... arg sorry i run on to much... but hades hope it helps... we're looking foreward to more of your work.

Ryshandra and Afrieal
bratling bards

Awww come on this story is great keep going I like how you're doing it so far. The problem really is that Trigun is let's face it a bit of an oldies anime but still hella good and worth watching. However the newer anime crowds seem to prefer the newere anime like Bleach and Naruto so Trigun sadly gets kicked under the rug but you've got a good style of writing and I enjoy reading your work please don't stop this fic because it is good and it's got my interest at least. Hopefully soon some more people will reveiw sometimes you just gotta set off the chain reaction with one or two to start so don't give up hope. Good luck and keep this going cause it really is good even if the general public decided it's not literate enough to realize it. Love and peace to you until next chapter. ^_^.

-Vash

Oh hon i'm sorry we couldn't get to you sooner I'm in the middle of reorginizing at work and Rysh's computer finally gave up the ghost and she's been reading from her work system. i borrowed my boss's system after he read your story and said it was okay for us to review (he's a hardass but fair) he wanted me to say how much he liked your story too so there you go three reviews for the price of one *grin* please continue you've got a good story going

Affie Rysha and Affie's boss Tony

Yes yes continue this I rather like it. You're doing good with it and to tell the truth it kinda has me hooked. I think i saw your original fic to this too i remember reading somehting like it. But yeah contunue it it's good.

I enjoyed it very much good job please post the rest