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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's a nice Ran x Ken piece! I love this pairing and you're right, there isn't enough fics on this great couple.
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it is HARDLY drabble. *dry tone*
you very expertly manipulated Ken's identity at the beginning for a splendid effect later on. i like that you didn't hold out on us very long with it; but when we DID finally figure out who it was, the action kept going enough to not make the revelation overly-dramtic.
i also really like the "Ran" slip-up. *grin*
i wonder how you would write their relationship in a bigger story. what are the conditions? do the others know? does it effect their work at all? how does Ken feel about Aya-chan? etc.
you very expertly manipulated Ken's identity at the beginning for a splendid effect later on. i like that you didn't hold out on us very long with it; but when we DID finally figure out who it was, the action kept going enough to not make the revelation overly-dramtic.
i also really like the "Ran" slip-up. *grin*
i wonder how you would write their relationship in a bigger story. what are the conditions? do the others know? does it effect their work at all? how does Ken feel about Aya-chan? etc.