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Wow... this was amazing. It was everything you could want in a story... I was ... in awe... So great story... I luv it!! ^_~

Great story. Loved the twists. Keep writing. : )

This story was so good that I literally shit myself while reading it! Now that I'm done reading it and I've done this review, I'll clean myself up, but it was worth it! You have a new fan, please keep writing and I'll keep r&r-ing!

I just got through reading all 12 chapters, and I must admit, I love this fic so far! I don't think its rough at all, though I do think a light beta would help out heaps. I adore the plot, the Hikaru/Kaoru action, the angst, and the involvement of the other characters as well. I can't wait to see the next chapter, and what you have in store for your readers.

Great job!

oh please oh please email me the last chapters when your doen please? I can't get on this site at home because my mother doesn't allow it, so I need to get it from someone else. So please please?

hey, this is a really good story so far (i've only read 5 chapters at the moment, but wanted to pause and tell you i'm enjoying it) twincest from ouran is the BEST! it's so hard to find good STORIES and not just one shots in the smaller/newer fandoms and finding a kaoru/hikaru story that is multichaptered, building towards their relationship instead of straight out smutting it out, and not necessarily taking the direct path--this is awesome!

i did want to mention, though, that in chapter 5, when you had kyouya and hikaru say "ohio" to each other, it should be "ohayo"

now it seems to me not only is kaoru having feelings for hikaru, but it seems hikaru is having them for kaoru as well, and both twins are oblivious of the other's true feelings. is kyouya wanting to date kaoru because his first choice tamaki is in love with haruhi? and now that haruhi has confessed about her feelings for hikaru, this thing is full of love geometry!! i can't wait to get back to the story and see if i'm right in my assumptions, and what happens next! ..so here i go!

oh my... i probably should've seen that coming, but *wow*, kyouya planned it allllllll. like ALLLLLLLLLLLLLL. damn, clever scheming bastard... well i loved the story, i look forward to the last chapter, though i wish it didn't have to end so soon after i found it :p

This was amazing! I really loved how twisted things were, and how everyone kept being surprised or manipulated by the 'evil' Kyouya. He certainly is a scheming lad, isn't he? There are a few mistakes here and there, but they aren't huge or story-threatening. I think you can post this on the Double F, minus the titillating scenes involving the bros. I can't wait to read more about K's evil and how he seems to still be in control of things, but really---with a guy like him around, who needs to decide on their own individual fate? Sheesh. He's really in need of something else or someone else that can get him to realize that he needs his own shit in life to focus on 'steada someone else's. Naw, really, I love the guy! ^_^ Can't wait for the epi!

Your story is awesome. It made me cried and nervous at some parts. The caracters are as adorable as they are in the mangas. I hope you'll continue your story (I want to know the end ^_^.)

Thanks for your talent.

This happens to be one of my new favorite fictions!

YAY!!!

Great solo/sex scene, very hott.

Wonderful job!