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for A Ghost Story

by CoconutGrove

person Darkephoenix
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is still fabulous. You have an excellent way of creating tension then relieving it before it gets to be too much for the reader. I'm enjoying this thoroughly.
person Robyn
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:D I liked Hazel as the medium. I am not certain I like that pendant he gave Gojyo.

I am glad to find out the guardians are not necessarily evil.

*sighs* Does Hakkai REALLY have to go?
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you made Hazel the medium. I love him, he just amuses me to no end. Will we being seeing him again? And just what is he up to giving Gojyo that pendent?
person gerigirl
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story it's getting better every time i read it and i've read it quite a few times already need more chapters please going insane in the brain waiting for more writing to come my way.
person gen50
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting story.
reminds of old ghost stories. do you believe in ghosts?
just curious.

as they say the plot thickens...
i wonder how you will resolve the hakkai-gojyo relationship.
reminds me of an old old tv series i liked - the ghost and mrs. muir
person Ginny
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*shivers* I sooooo shouldn't have read this right before sleeping!
Go Goku for figuring it out though!
person gerigirl
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
when do you think you will have up anymore chapters for this story i glanced at it before but then i started reading it and now i can't wait to see what happens next what is going on with sanzo and goku? will they find out were kanan's body is buried? and what evil force is keeping hakkai trap in this house these are the things i need/want to know. please^_^
person Robyn
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EEK! The other creepies are making me as nervous as Goku!
person Robyn
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You've got a very interesting story going on here. I am glad I gave it a shot.
person vbruce
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you've done a wonderful job with this story. It's interesting and very well done. There are some spelling errors but I can overlook that in the light of good story telling. Keep up the good work.

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