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Wow. I am totally stun.

That was a bloody end! But somehow appropriate.

I liked this story, I hope you decide to write some more for this fandom in the future.

Doing something he wants and getting paid big money for it - how like Schuldig. I like this story, is full of surprising twists. I can't wait to see how it ends!

This is wonderful! I love Farfarello's accomplishments during the year they were apart, and it was a delight seeing him as a rescuer. Very cold of Brad, and Nagi's actions were more from hatred, hmmm. Schuldig's fears and need for an anchor fit very well. I look forward to more.

Oh, this was nice! I'm really enjoying the story. I loved the part with the car buying and Schuldig being practical, haha.

i'm totally hooked! ^_^
i loved your dialogue in the prologue SO much! so the lack of it in the first chapter was highgly disappointing. *cries* it also made it slightly confusing to figure out who was thinking or saying what. I appreciate that Alfred & his father were purely support characters, but it would've added spice to hear their voices more clearly. as it was, u did an excellent job portraying the boy's insecurities & affection, & the father's arrogance & contempt.

i can't wait for updates!!! XD
i find myself wondering if Brad tipped them off to save himself (& Nagi?) -or even just out of spite....
& what of Farf? has he already been turned over to Rosenkruez? or did the other 3 Schwarz go on the run?

so many questions! i can't wait for more!! ^_^

Oooh! Very nice. Prologue was very effective and I'm curious how you'll bring the events there.