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...oh you tease. You left it there on purpose. >.O

Man, you made me love L even MORE. I didn't know that was possible.


Lovely, hot, delightful.

I couldn't refuse to click the title after reading your description. "Well, I do like eloquence," I thought to myself. I've had some bad experiences in the past with people who thought they were eloquent, but for once the adjective is correctly applied, and for that I thank you. I'm enjoying the hell out of this story.

It's odd I should discover it so soon after finding your work on "Bound Prince" from an entirely different source. I'm enjoying that also. (Thank you so much for leaving the Japanese text in the screencaps alongside the English translations. Being an unbelievable dork, I like to learn something from my porn, and I can't tell you how helpful it is to see the grammar at work in the more complex sentences.)

Oh...Do I bother you with mine constant reviewing? This is getting a bit too much, maybe.^_^ But I do love your fic, really, and I'm enjoying reading it immensely.))

Gods, this goes on just BEAUTIFUL. And. I adore Mello.
/And Matt, and L, and Light too, but yours Mello is _real_, as I imagined him./
More, or I'll die, so don't be so cruel, 'kay? ^_^ I love you, Author.

“You’re wondering, aren’t you,” he whispers, and, breath hot and moist against L’s hand, Mello nods,

“Yeah.”

And he can feel the lips stretching to a smile against his ear and L bites at the cartilage shell when he replies,

“Yes, I did. And no, he didn’t like it.”


read that and died! best line ever! haven't stopped laughing. I ma keeping read now. enjoying this greatly. ^_^

HISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! Where is the rest? EVIL!

Pleeease, be nice, post next chapter quickly, I'm ssssooo curious!

Fuck. That's it. Just fuck.

Isn't hot here? LOL
This is hot and the plot is just wondeful