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for Matt x Mello

by flagfish

person amicablenemesis
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"OF COURSE HE'S ALIVE!"~ Amicablenemesis's stepsister. I'm using her name but I have to say that i can't really see the story progressing unless Raito's alive. Unless if Kira is dead, Mellow would have to infiltrate L's personal computer or something along those lines... which isn't happening anytime soon. But I applaud you wildly. This fic most deffinatly deserves it's rating and I'm very glad that I stumbled upon it. Thank you for making my day so amusing! Now I've got a wonderful fiction to roll around in my head while I'm at work!
*HUGGLES!*
person myinukoi
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it took so long to get back to this. I've been quite busy...

Mello's reactions in this ficcy are totally suprising me. I really hope there isn't some underlying meaning and you're thinking 'Well, everyone else understood what I meant, how come this one dumbfuck can't?' But by all means, I am enjoying his unsteady (to me, in any case) actions. Predictablity in all other fics has been numbing my brain down.
person ygt
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like the way you write the characters
person laineyue
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O OMIGAWD I so love L and Matt~~~ >.<

Oh and torturing Mello is nice ^-^
person Udyjay
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY MOTHER OF GOD YES YES YES D:


ASDLKFMSDF


THAT WAS SO HOT. DX


I LOOOOVED EVERYTHING. OMG MOAR. UPDATE.


*especially loved the part where it said that Mello liked being fucked naked/with his leather clothes on*

*w*
person Eleena
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this is by far the best MattxMello fic I've ever read. It's awesome how you've managed to make this slutty as all hell and yet still completely IC! Matt's hard to do 'cause there's not much official information on him, but I cosplay/roleplay Matt a lot and this is exactly how I make him -- albeit a little pissier, but then that's more me instead of Matt. ^^;;; *tries not to do that on a regular basis, but it's hard* ANYWAYS! I can't wait 'till the next chapter!
person Udyjay
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LFKdsmfasldjkfmsadf omfgomfg, this is so hawt. XD I haven't been reviewing all the chapters cause all I wanna do is find out what happens next. *w*
person Udyjay
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aff.net Fucked up my last review, so I deleted it. xD I spammed about how awesome and unique and hawt this fic is. And how amazing you are and that I want to worship you. :] I LOVE YOU, UPDATE SOON PLOX.

AND NOW I SPAM IN HAPPINESS.


SLDKFMSDKLFMSDF ASODKFJMASDKFJLNA XMV XKLJH LKJXCVNSAM,DAS
person haruko
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh fuck, this is HOT! and you outdo yourself with just about every new chapter. please write more soon?
person Udyjay
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY MOTHER OF GOD. DX I don't think no matter how much someone tells you you're awesome, you're going to truly know it. This is GENIUS, and it's sexy and mmm and full of win. D:

I love how you portray the characters, the fights and the little sex scenes. ;w; I just wish you'd describe them more, I know you'd do an excellent job. D:

OMFG. This is so hot. D: It's so hot it's disgusting. i love it. DX MARRY MEEE


AND UPDATE SOON

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