rate_review Reviews

This is a truly wonderful story. You've got a strong grasp on the characters, an original and well-thought out plot, and you make me keep coming back to re-read everything over and over again! I've read up to your last posting on ff.net, also, and I hope you will continue this story (because I really hate to see a such a great story left unfinished). Fabulous story! Keep it up!

Wow...wow...wow...and um...wow? I read the whole thing through and I must say that I am hooked. Please post more soon. I know that this was quite the undertaking that you took upon your shoulders but if the Blade Children, Hiyono and Ayumu can persevere so can you right? I'll beg if need be. The story is too phenomenal to just leave hanging. You must complete it! It would destroy us faithful followers if you didn't. So, continue on, please?

WOW!!!! I love the updates! I think that Kanone is going to be in for a big surprise if he truly goes after Ayumu. Please keep it coming I can't wait to read more.

Great fic, Hope to see more... i just love ayumu!

more?

well well well. he's got a hidden ability. is ayume psychic? but hell i like this story!

Yea! I can't wait for more. Please keep it coming.