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person Yu-chan
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far! I really like how it follows the story on some points and on others it's your version. Especially the Nakago scene I loved that Tasuki pointed out the obvious I mean how could Miaka not think of that?!! Anywho plz update your story soon I want to read the rest and I promise to start reviewing more! Matta ne ^_~
person Bulma
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*bows at her feet* You are now my god. If one could cum from reading smut, I would have. *blush* Damn, that was the hottest, most smutty, deliciously wonderful thing I've ever read. I have tingles. I have goosebumps. I feel like a pervert for reading it three times before my brain could fully process what I had read. If someone could die of bloodloss via nasal cavity, then I'm dead. Really and truly dead. I had to mop blood out of my goddamned keyboard! My head is spinning, even now that I took time to go bum a smoke from someone just to revel in the beautiful smuttiness that is this chapter. It says something when someone needs a smoke after reading one of your smut scenes. You have a talent for writing smut and I bow to your skill.

~Nikki-chan
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the Tasuki/Chirko bonding. Tasuki would make a great father. Anyway the boy being together is just so hot. I am hoping that Miaka and Tasuki can resolve things between the two of them.
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Tamahome can still marry Tasuki and have kids..they can adopt. Anyway the boys are ghot together and lol about Keisuke and Tetsuya wanting to have sex after seeing all those pictures can't wait to read more!
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Tasuki in a towel...drool! Can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!
person Bulma
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think my brain died somewhere after the water droplets sliding down Tasuki's washboard abs...

I don't think that Miaka and Tamahome are the only ones who would drool themselves stupid at seeing my precious bandit wet and naked. I think Taiitsukun watches through one of her mirrors. XDD

I knew it! Mitsukake had the unconcious bandit holed up somewhere! XDD Okay, not quite, but close! Thank you for NOT killing anyone yet. I wonder how this is going to change the outcome of things? You must write more soon, dear. I will most definatly be back for the next rousing piece!

PS: Thanks for the review on Duty. ^-^ Glad you liked it. ~_^ *hugs*
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO!! TASUKI!! NOT GOOD! you answer your boyo damnit!!!!! gah! update soon! PLEASE!
person tasukigirl78
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yippy you're back. I was waited for the sequel to come up and it was worth the wait. Great chapter! Can't wait to read more.
person Bulma
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EVIL!!!!

T-T I'm going to rip my hair out worrying for my Tasuki-chan. Lovely job! I can hardly wait to see the next part in this! I sort of get the feeling that Tasuki's out cold somewhere because of the sudden power drain and the swirling of Tama's emotions. Or Mitsukake knocked him out so that he could play with Tasuki too. XDD I doubt it, though.

You had BETTER write the next part soon or I'll spam your review list with pleading. XDD Best of luck with the next bits. *huggles*

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