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for Broken Only to Heal Again

by tshapochi

person wlk68
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. The way that Zoro and Sanji are slowly coming to realize what they mean to each other is wonderful. I also think it's cute that Teki calls Sanji "Mommy". *grin*

You've left us hanging here with the end of chapt 20. Zoro needs to rescue Sanji and kick some serious butt! Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing another chapter posted soon.
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH OH OH TIS GUD. WANT SANZO SEXING NOW PLZ. <3
person Only me
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG.
FINISH. IT'S GUD. LYK RLY RLY GUD. U GOT ME LYK PANIKING. IT'S A GUD STORY! FIIIIIIINISH! ;D
person wlk68
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. Please update again soon.
person Dragon7
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*giggling* Aw, so cute. Poor Teki is easy to upset (but then, uprooted children are), but wow, the Straw Hats are just all so adorable- Usopp and Chopper performing the time-old "HE DID IT" routine. Sadly, Teki is ignorant of the proper response- not to cry, but to go "NO HE DID IT" and point back! Na, I'm certain the dork trio will teach him. ^-^
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is continuing beautifully and I can't wait for more (i'm an impatiant person sorry). I bet Chopper's gonna give zoro all hell when he realises zoro just stubbornly pulled the anchor up even with his injuries.
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH Gomen Gomen Gomen! I havent review because life is just bloody peachy with me, Ive been so damn busy. Gomen nasai.

But here I am. I loved the last chapter so much. Finally a kiss between Luffy and Nami! I melted when Sanji wonder if Zoro ever looked like a cute little boy *so sweet*. And just as Nami and Robin I was terrified of that scene where Sanji lost control and kicked Tajimaru. I remember a scene in one of the OP special where Chopper runs for his life and a little boy wants to hugh him and play with him as a toy, I found that so hilarious, poor Chopper, but I have to agree I would do the same thing if I met him... Finally the crew is almost complete. We still need Zoro, but things really went to the right pace and to the right place in this fic. I adore it.

Thanks for sharing it. :p
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay new chapters new chapters. If I remember rightly I've already told you how much I'm enjoying this story and given that the enjoyment hasn't waned in the slightest I thought I would try to encourage updates cause i'm greedy about things I like and want more. Please Please Please update again soon. Sanji a little slow on the uptake there hehe. I loved Luffy's comment on having two zoro's. It just felt so umm Luffy like
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*laughing*
Oh, excellent, excellent last line. The Sergeant's thinking he could escape from Chopper... FAIL. I hope they dump him into the sea when they leave. It'd wash him off some.

You still have a great setup, things we want to know- Luffy and Nami, Sanji and Zoro and each other, Muteki's mother, his granfather's secret, the mystery Marine, etc, etc... ^^ I look forward to seeing what you do. Thank you for continuing to share!

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