rate_review Reviews

I personally think that this story is very well written. I'd also like to express my joy that you have straight pairings in this fanfic, since it seems like there are far too many yaoi and yuri (though mostly yaoi) for One Piece. Not that I have anything against them... they just aren't my thing.
Keep up the good work and update as often as possible!

First off let me say that I liked your Story. It was an interesting twist and i was begining to enjoy where it was going...but the end of chapter 3 ruined it for me. Me being a writer myself i can understand that you want people to praise your art work and to give you advise on how you can improve...but i don't think authors should make people review there stories. Because then you don't get really feed back. you just get reviews that say "Please update!" or "I love this story!". That doesn't really help you with your skill, just your ego. Being an author means that you write stories so people can enjoy them, even if they don't review. That's all i really have to say and i'm not doing this to piss you off. I write this to every author...because i was one of those reviewers and it doesn't help. I don't like when i get reviews like that. because there is always a way to improve...and those review just don't. Thanks for reading this. If you want to complain i did leave my emial so feel free to write me. I'll listen.

This is so much fun- it's really a delightful read, and a great way to pass the time. Thank you so much for sharing!
Luffy and Usopp and CHOPPER make me laugh (hooray Dork Trio!), Robin is always a favorite of mine when she's done well (and here she is), Nami is sweet (when she isn't a witch :3) and Sanji and Zoro provide the angst. *shrugs*
Saa, it seems to be their lot in life... comic relief (EVERY Straw Hat is comic relief, and there's no escaping it), angst, a little exposition. Hee. And Muteki is a good OC, not obnoxious.
Well, he's obnoxious because he's a little kid, not because he's THERE. :3

yay a new chapter. I don't usually review every single chapter but I fear you stopping such a good story. hence I don't really know what to say as my last review covereed it pretty well. umm umm keep writing pretty please?

gah! That was so great i love how this story is going! :) hope you update again soon! Luffy is just too funny...

poor poor zoro. please keep writing. I rarely review unless the story caught my interest so if you stop now I'll get bored and my brain will attempt to fill in the rest and it won't be one tenth as good as yours so please please please don't stop now. I'm gonna go check if you write anything else bye bye

ok i forgot to say this last time, but the luffyxzoro kiss just pwned my mind in the greatest way! X3 well anyways can't wait for the next chpt. and multi-chapters would be great but i hope they dont take to long this story is really good :(

omfg that was orgasmic! @.@ that was so funny, poor zoro.. lol i can't wait for the next chapter! update soon please!

The kiss between Zoro and Luffy was so HOT!!!!! *im a perv, i know*

And THE PHRASE of this chap was: “Why does Mr. Pee-pee grow when you rub on it?”

LOL I even cried out laughing. Thanks for sharing.

*cheers*brilliant! i can't wait 4 more