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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Another Chapter!
The whipping scene was creepy, but well written. The part of Luffy treating Zoro's wounds was really good, I loved how you managed to transmit the emotions of him as a friend, as a nakama, as an accomplice... And the plot it's getting very interesting and intriguing. I can't wait to see Nami's emotions about Luffy. The "bad timing" thing was hilarious, cause' that's the story of my life.
Keep going, I can't say that the story is getting better because it was already good and perfect since the beginning.
Thanks for sharing :p
The whipping scene was creepy, but well written. The part of Luffy treating Zoro's wounds was really good, I loved how you managed to transmit the emotions of him as a friend, as a nakama, as an accomplice... And the plot it's getting very interesting and intriguing. I can't wait to see Nami's emotions about Luffy. The "bad timing" thing was hilarious, cause' that's the story of my life.
Keep going, I can't say that the story is getting better because it was already good and perfect since the beginning.
Thanks for sharing :p
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
as promised <3333 i luv it i luv it i LUV IT!
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
? stupid thing. as promised*heart* i luv it i luv it i LUV it!
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay. I'm glad you finally updated, I really hope you update soon again though...
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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, an update, yeay!
Thank you, so, please type quickly!
Thank you, so, please type quickly!
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Definitely a good chapter, I was hoping to see a bit of Zoro and Luffy after they where kidnaped, but I liked how the story is flowing. I was shock and excited about the kiss between Luffy and Nami, but the I was double shock when they were attacked. I felt bad because I hadnt review your fic, sorry... :(
Great chapter. Thanks for sharing it.
Great chapter. Thanks for sharing it.
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the next chapter, update soon.
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hope you update soon. cant wait to read the next chapt. :)
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww!! Don't stop the story! It's really good, please do continue.
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August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Please do continue.