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What a coincidence , my area code is 905 haha...loving you're story, i love Shuichi he's just too cute

lucky shu, lots of people love and care for him (particularly TWO drop dead gorgeous guys). Don't get me wrong, i love the previous chapter too, yuki and shu's scene was way way too hot! in this chapter, i liked the scene where yuki and ryu met at tohma's. their rivalry is palpable. So, who's gonna get to shu first? can't wait for the next chapter..!

please oh please oh please update soon!!!!! im really loving this story!!

Chapter 8 is a great way to progress. I don't know why Tohma didn't think of hacking into the financial records of the whorehouse to get info. K should have been able to do that for him. Interesting, and yes, I did notice that Ryu hadn't been on Shuichi's mind much, but he had always been more fond of Eiri all along. And being "sold" to the highest bidder for your 1st time in a whorehouse, is the proper expression, so don't beat yourself up over that expression. Remember, each time Shuichi was with a client, he was being sold, on a time basis, now he was sold outright. Now- onto the rest of the story.. this is getting really good! Thanks

oh I'm sooooo relieved that you aren't going to leave the story without finishing it!! dunno why but lately everybody is abandoning their fics and that drives me crazy lol can't wait for the next chappie, totally love the story!!! u wouldn't believe how glad I was when I arrived home from my holidays and found the new chapters^^. Anyanka

^_^ I really loved that! Total awsomeness! ^_^ Cookies and pocky for you, and yamyams if you update soon. ^_^ Can't wait to find out what happens next!

priceless? yes!

Just finished through chapter 7, and you wrote the hottest scene I have ever read. I like that K didn't try anything with Shuichi, afterall. Thanks for not taking my suggestion. As for Rage getting him, I am crying. Now it's going to be an all out manhunt to retrieve Shuichi. Just remember that Tohma is supposed to be one of the richest men around, so buying him back may not be that difficult for him.

*smile* I meant the story's waaay shorter than what I felt like reading ;) wasn't actually complaining, so please don't pout at me...*puppy eyes* hope you're not mad at me...
And yes, I love the new chapter...Can K get to sleep with Shuichi? Please? I know it doesn't fit the story, so don't mind me, I just like K...
Hm...seems like i just can't write a decent review today...sorry
*eagerly waiting for a new chapter*

Dennis

*smile* No, you do not take anonymous replies...see? I had to register just because you sounded like you wouldn't mind one more reply ;)
Now, on a more...serious (if I can ever be called that) note, I'll give it a 5.
*mutters about writers who don't accept ratings only*
Ahem...(feels weird to have people read my comment...)a.characters--Well, they're amazingly 'in-character',so to say; although the setting is obviously different, they remain the same adorable guys. I'm pretty sure I would've guessed who they are even without names, and that's a definite plus on my list
b.storyline--If I say it got me hooked, is it considered a comment? Flowing, that must be the word...(I hope)
c.summary--Oops, i didn't read it careful enough...*goes to read* (decided against going to read) I remember saying something about Shuichi getting in a brothel and fisting...Other than that, i'm not sure (now goes to read it)
d.spelling and grammar--No mistakes that I could notice...(is English you native language?)
e.writing style--No way! My teacher of English always comments on that, so I'll leave it uncommented (*shudder* would hate to associate her with this fic...)
f.*cough* Good enough? Well...how about fantastic? Oh, and certain author notes got me to read them over again... (was about to ask something, but I'd rather not blush madly upon finding the answer at the beginning of the next chapter...)
g.overall story--Way too short *as in:'*puppy eyes* please write more'*. But that's hardly a comment

Hm...highly incoherent comment, I assume...Even if I did try...
Hope you'll get some decent comments as well, not just my excuse of a review...
*smile* denis