rate_review Reviews

your being gay should have no bearing when it comes to reading or reviewing your awesome story!! that jerk who called you a bad name is just some wacked out, no talent hack who's more then likly envious of your superior writing ability!!

now that i got that out of the way......

your rating system is a good idea but, i can't remember what i'm going to rate.
so i will just guess.....
story: 5+
plot: 5+
i can't remember what else!!!SORRY!

all i know is that i love this story and will check back every day for updates!!

Through chapter 4, and it's great. Ok. so Ryu is a customer and not one of the guys there, but still, it's wonderful. Now. K should come in, as a customer and take Shu out- but not necessarily to return him to Tohma. Why not let him act like a customer That part makes sense, but while he has Shu, have our two jaded heroes go back and try and find Shu.. Maybe have K actually kidnap Shuichi from the brothel, and hold him for ransom, that way the 3 others can somehow come to his rescue. You wanted ideas... I'll be waiting.

i hope that tohma finds shu-chan.

shu-chan seems like he likes being a whore...

ASOTA

hi!
i could not remember if i reviewed for chapter 3 so, i'll just make a new one.
just out of curiosity....will ryu have a temper? if memory serves, shu called out yuki name twice!
and will taki make another appearance?
in case i don't say it enough....
**this story rocks**

great start. Why not have Tats and Sakano in the brothel as well, working. K and Ryu can always be customers or K and Ryu can be undercover working for Tohma to get Shuichi back, while Eiri figures out what is going on and how HE is going to save Shuichi from that place.

no one will out bid eiri yuki!!
i wish he would pay that amount for one night with me!!**sigh**
anyway, well done. nice long chapter.
i like the name of the brothel.....hummmmmmmm........do you by chance watch naruto????**big smile**

my poor boys....having tohma as their "daddy"! i can't wait to how yuki comes across shu!
please update asap!