rate_review Reviews

Hey, I personally would like to say I love your stories. I especially like how your going through three different perspectives of the three different trainers. For example, Gin is caring but thinks of his PokeGirl's best interests. Sakuya(sp?) is shy but submissive as a trainer and Arden is generous and caring but still has respect, even if too much, for his PokeGirls. I'd just like to say, keep up the writing but if you would do me a favor, an Eevee version would draw me in more. It's my favorite pokemon and I think it might draw some attention to your story since Eevee is a well known pokemon and theres only like three other stories with it in this forum. But anyways, keep up the good work and good luck. Dont get writers block like I get which prevents me from finishing my unposted stories.

P.S. Here is a picture of a Eevee in girl form if you need it. Kinda screwed up but should work good enough. Don't need to put one in if your against it but I'm trying to be persuasive. http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b397/hievi/eve-1.jpg

Really great story. At the beginning it seemed a regular fanfic but as I advanced on the chapters I found it to be very original and well built. The characters have deep and developed personalities. It is visible that the author worked hard to evolve the story. I love the way you cycle among 3 separate characters that walk in the same world yet react to it in completely diferent ways. I believe he intends to join them sometime in the future but eh, one can only guess.

I ask the author to don't let this story go to waste. I believe he can make much more great chapters. He's a great writer.

.....This is a nice story....Plz continue updating. XD Plus, it has a good plot, characters that are actually fleshed out not like cardboard cuttings and a sense of promise, plotwise. o.o

Nice chapter. The story continues. I guess all parties are going to meet up with each other but dont see it happening anytime soon.

o.0 ? Is Sakuya thresholding ?

Nice story, plz add mmmmoooorrreeeeee......

Okay, for the very few people who seemed to read this, I've got good news and bad news. The good news is, I have more chapters I'll be adding over the next few days. The bad news is, once those chapters are put up, I will no longer be updating this story. Instead, I'll be rewriting it, changing it to a greater or lesser degree. As well, I shall simultaneously be posting it at another site, www.pokegirl.org
This is where you all come in. I don't really get many reviews of any of my stories on any site, so I'll be making it into a contest. For the new version, whichever site's copy gets more reviews, they will get the next chapter a bit earlier than the other site. (Yeah, yeah, not all that fair, plus rather audacious of me, but what can I say, I want, no, need, more reviews.)

And as for the question about T-elos? I am drawing upon the multitude of different pokegirls in the official Pokedex at pokegirl.org, she's a Zeromer. Not based on a PokeMon at all. But I didn't make her.

Okay, next trio of chapters being posted now!

Yoush. Good stuff. I'm curious as to how long you planned this to be, seeing as you are telling three or four different stories at once. I'd love to see more.

>.< Its a good story with great characters n plot twisties, would hate to see this fic go. Plz keep updating ^^
Hope to see more in the future.

Great story and concept, though wouldn't it be great if all the characters met up?
The Sakuya chapters are some of the best. Please keep updating.

dude this is an amazing story please don't stop updating it would be a great lose if this story didnt get updated any more. I personally cant wait to see what happens between the two sisters, and what happens between Arden and tito. what ever you do please dont stop this story it's just to great not to mention one of the best pokegirl stories i have ever read. i beg you as a huge fan of this story please keep going.

Hey thanks for listening to my review!! The story flows much nicer now that you have a separate chapter devoted to each character. Rather than just small parts of a lemon you can write a whole story for each character. Until/If they meet up and the story fuses into one.

Much better read thanks!

Hope the next chapter comes out soon!

Wow, that was pretty hot. I saw most of the similarities to real pokemon, such as ditto, but what pokemon was T-elos based off of? Is she an original one? Just curious. I'd love to see this story updated, so keep it up!

~Sy