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Interesting chapter. Can't wait to see if there's anything left of Sanzo after Hakkai finishes with him. You have excellent taste in music by the way.

sorry about the kougaji jien mix up its just the last part of their names (well jiens after he changed it) seems so alike and i really didint give it much thought beacuse this story rocks! Pissed off hakkai is hot! ^_^ i wonder if he takes sanzo to a battered womens shelter or something to see what happens after a woman is raped. Maybe he should smack sanzo....PLEASE LET HIM SMACK SANZO!

Kinda weird that Goyjo's own brother seemed to have the hots for him. he's always nice and protective of goyjo so its just ewww. also i like playing with guy's hair to...it's the epitome of girly things to do lol

You handled the balance thing very well. :) I was going to mention that with the couple of inches of height difference, she might have problems adjusting to her weapon, but it looks like the sparring practices she's gotten in have worked wonders in that department, *winks* The weapon she uses requires finesse to begin with, I am happy to see you've converted that one step further. I adore the idea of the fighting techniques becoming almost 'dance' in her repertoire.

Hmmmm, Sanzo's reactions bug me. The fact he can't seem to treat the kappa like the kappa isn't doing either of them any favors. He's going to have to get over that, quickly. This small fight may have helped put Goyjo back into Sanzo's mental list of 'fighter'. I can only hope.

Goyjo is going to be slightly more flexable, being less muscle bound than her old body.

Let's see, what else. hahahahaha, Hakkai suggesting a lacy bra to Gojyo. LOL. She's going to have to get some sports bras. :P Lace isn't going to work for long. *winks*

Oh, Kougaji. Now that's one interesting twist. *smirks*

Hmmm, speaking of, how are Lierin and Yaone going to react? Or would they even care? Is this going to make a difference in the fights and whom pairs up against whom? I can see Kougaji trying to pair up with Gojyo now, but Goku telling him hell no. :P

Yes, this is turning out to be highly entertaining. Can't wait to see what the three aspects say about this one. Not to mention the (not so) merciful goddess is probably rolling in the lotus blossoms laughing hir ass off.

I usually don't read gender bender. You are doing an excellent job with this type of story so far. Gojyo's reactions are believeable. I liked seeing what was going on in Hakkai's and Sanzo's heads. The fact Goku is treating Gojyo like Gojyo is good. :)

Now, to see how well Gojyo can still fight. As a woman, his (now her) center of balance is going to be much different. It's going to be tough to retrain mucsles that already have mucsel memory patterns to do slightly different things.

This is fucking awesome and really well developed. Can't wait for the next chapter. Wonder what Gojyo's brother is going to think the next time they meet up with Kougaiji's group.

Lesson number one: Do not piss off the witch. Lesson number two: See lesson number one. Gods that is priceless. I love it. Excellent plot so far.