rate_review Reviews

Hey
i just wanted to say how much i am enjoying the story so far. I love the tenderness between Gojyo and Hakkai even if it isn't physical. The chapters may be a little short but i don't mind that, in fact i like that. It means the story is more to the point without any of that meaningless dialogue that often get's thrown around. I write yaoi for saiyuki though i've only got one posted on here called Raw Sugar. Mine never manages to show a bond or a relationship between characters and it's often brutal and to the point. i think it's because i like to save tha depth and angst for my non-yaoi pieces. It would probably explain why most of my yaoi tends to be on the dark side or unemotional. Its so refreshing to read a piece that can keep the darkness and yet still have the emotion. I've been thinking quite a lot about trying to accomplish the same thing but as of yet i can't think of a good enough story to go with it. I'm a Sanzo girl though so i know he'll be featured in it strongly that's for sure! hehe! I think the best thing about this piece is even if you do decide to take the boys relationship that step further, it'll will make perfect sense and not a love born from thin air! I'm looking forward to reading your other chapters and will definatly be keeping an eye for anymore works from you!

Latreia x

“I-I… I’m sorry… your sheets are stained. I’m sorry…”
Typical Hakkai... apologizing for everything.

OHHHHH, poor Hakkai.

Great story, can't wait for the next chapter.

Well, Gojyo did find out something happened. Hakkia REALLY isn't in his right mind (not that I blame him) if he thought the 'no one' answer was going to work.

I hope Gojyo has a lot of patience with Hakkai...he's going to need it.

Sooo.... is Gojyo going to protect Hakkai or will Hakkai snap?? Should be interesting.

wow.. *sniff* that was tragic. Keep going and I am crossing my fingers that the boys make it through and that Banri gets his.

Ah, that's a very interesting mind twist Hakkai is putting himself through, thinking this must be his punishment.

Hopefully you update soon, because I want to see what Gojyo does when he finally figures out what's going on.

actually I like it. They don't have an update link do they?

Awww poor Hakkai I like this story alot is straight in to smut not that I mind but I like a bit of build up and plot which you have supplied so thank you for that ^^ A very awesome job. Well done

Still with ya and am enjoying the story... I think you have Hakkai's charcater down really well and the only problem.......................... too short! NEED MORE *grin*

I really, REALLY liked it. Gojyo being so perceptive. *sighs* I wonder why Hakkai is bothering trying to hide what happened. It does niether of them any good.

:) I do like the quick updates. :P