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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was amazing - I strongly urge you to continue!
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job! Both the plot and smut were exelent. I hope to see more from you in the future.
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
umm, can i say hot smut much.
the plot you added to the story as well as to the sex was truly great.
I really enjoyed reading that story. And even though you say it took you four hours, I want you to know that they were not in vain :O wow. Your writing technique and style (yes different) are amazing, the words and phrases your choosed made the characters. I enjoyed how, much the characters seemed like the acutal characters.
though I personlly would have enjoyed a more vivid description of the types of toys tezuka choose to use, my imagentatino tends to be good on that subject >^_^< yay. write another story soon!
the plot you added to the story as well as to the sex was truly great.
I really enjoyed reading that story. And even though you say it took you four hours, I want you to know that they were not in vain :O wow. Your writing technique and style (yes different) are amazing, the words and phrases your choosed made the characters. I enjoyed how, much the characters seemed like the acutal characters.
though I personlly would have enjoyed a more vivid description of the types of toys tezuka choose to use, my imagentatino tends to be good on that subject >^_^< yay. write another story soon!
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Niiiice.
I must say, you've got guts. Even now, I break out into sweat when it comes to writing a threesome. I hate them. [The mechanics, that is. The actual product is wonderful.] So good job. Really, really good job. Especially for a first lemon.
Hmmm, your writing style frustrates me. [In a good way, but still.] In some cases, I want to know more about what happens between the characters, but then I can understand why you breeze through it, and it's always well done, thus the frustration. :p. I guess I just have a taste for angst. Heheheh.
Seriously, though, I think we have a lot in common in our taste for pairings and plots. If you want, take a look at some of my Fuji-centric pairings, and if you think you could work with me, it might be interesting to collaborate on something.
^.^ Thanks for a lovely fic with three of my favorite pairings and a nice helping of angst.
Krystal_Epyon
I must say, you've got guts. Even now, I break out into sweat when it comes to writing a threesome. I hate them. [The mechanics, that is. The actual product is wonderful.] So good job. Really, really good job. Especially for a first lemon.
Hmmm, your writing style frustrates me. [In a good way, but still.] In some cases, I want to know more about what happens between the characters, but then I can understand why you breeze through it, and it's always well done, thus the frustration. :p. I guess I just have a taste for angst. Heheheh.
Seriously, though, I think we have a lot in common in our taste for pairings and plots. If you want, take a look at some of my Fuji-centric pairings, and if you think you could work with me, it might be interesting to collaborate on something.
^.^ Thanks for a lovely fic with three of my favorite pairings and a nice helping of angst.
Krystal_Epyon
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Omg! Wow! This is awesome! You simply must write more. There definitely needs to be more Fuji-centric smut (especially with kink and Fuji as the bottom :P ).
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was really enjoyable. I like the way you set it up as a love story with a beginning, middle, and end and then bookended it with smut. Great job!
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*die of nose bleeding* you're killing me! You've got to write more. Love the background story. The smut is a double plus