rate_review Reviews

WOW. awesome. uke!zero is so great. moree~

Wow!!! that was soooo hoooot!..you are not stoping?..you have to make chapters!..Zero getting laid!!!!!!!!! YES!!!!!!!!!

This was a decent story. It needs some editing as there are several typos, but it was not too bad. I also want to point out that your story summary on the section page says that this is a one-shot. If this is a one-shot, there shouldn't be any more chapters.

Otherwise, I can't wait to read more.

I don't know what the community was about, so was this supposed to be a PWP? It felt sort of rushed to me, a lot of speech and not enough detail involved. One second Zero was awake and then the next Wild was pulling him out of his pants and raping him. There wasn't any development involved in the story, nothing below the surface of, "hey, sex!" I also saw quite a few misspellings and grammar errors, so you might want to have someone look the fic over to fix them. :) Oh. And Zero IS hot.

ohh wonderful start to the get_laid25. Haha wonderful story for sure!

~IceAngel~