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April 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So, you should totally update :) bc I just found this and spent the last two days reading, loving and adoring these chapters.
if you're posting on a diff site would you let me know?
at: carleigh.mitlon@gmail.com :)
if you're posting on a diff site would you let me know?
at: carleigh.mitlon@gmail.com :)
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September 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I'm so glad I found this story. It's not easy to write a fivesome (especially with *those* five) but you did it well and it was believable. I can't wait to read more. Thanks for sharing ♥
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May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
NO NO NO
WHATTTT???
1. You just made my day more beautiful than ever. when i saw chapter 27 I shouted. LOUD. I thought I died from happiness.
2. This chapter have more fluff than every other chapter squeeze in together. Yuki and Fujiko? Ah, MANTAP! (Sorry, couldnt help but exclaimed in my own language). AHHHH!!! Cross dressing! shopping! Fuji!!!!
XD
3. I believe you know it, but you really are my MOST MOST Favourite Author for all time.
4. Atobe... I found him really funny. when Fuji Tezu are walking together and Yuki Sanada was flirting, Atobe settled with himself in the mirror. GENIUS. It's just sooooo like him.
5. Fuji... You are scary, you make my blood cold. oh... Be my bride.
6. Yukimura... Kyah!!! That black boot silleto! I wish I can see the picture!!!
7. for Sanada and Tezuka, no comment. poor them, being dragged inside a woman world.
And when you say the next is the last I screamed again. My happiness was short lived.
WHY?
YOu are so cruel (although I was the one who keep asking the end but I hypocritely didnt want this to end).
Love you! Marry me?
WHATTTT???
1. You just made my day more beautiful than ever. when i saw chapter 27 I shouted. LOUD. I thought I died from happiness.
2. This chapter have more fluff than every other chapter squeeze in together. Yuki and Fujiko? Ah, MANTAP! (Sorry, couldnt help but exclaimed in my own language). AHHHH!!! Cross dressing! shopping! Fuji!!!!
XD
3. I believe you know it, but you really are my MOST MOST Favourite Author for all time.
4. Atobe... I found him really funny. when Fuji Tezu are walking together and Yuki Sanada was flirting, Atobe settled with himself in the mirror. GENIUS. It's just sooooo like him.
5. Fuji... You are scary, you make my blood cold. oh... Be my bride.
6. Yukimura... Kyah!!! That black boot silleto! I wish I can see the picture!!!
7. for Sanada and Tezuka, no comment. poor them, being dragged inside a woman world.
And when you say the next is the last I screamed again. My happiness was short lived.
WHY?
YOu are so cruel (although I was the one who keep asking the end but I hypocritely didnt want this to end).
Love you! Marry me?
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May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm excited this was updated! I liked this chapter..I cannot resist pretty ukes in dresses...
I cannot believe its almost over! I had to go back and reread parts... I think this is very good, and I don't think the action scene was bad at all!
I just hope they've mostly gotten past the angst and can move on to better things...like having wild orgy sex! Thanks.
I cannot believe its almost over! I had to go back and reread parts... I think this is very good, and I don't think the action scene was bad at all!
I just hope they've mostly gotten past the angst and can move on to better things...like having wild orgy sex! Thanks.
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February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HI~ I actuall found it! OMG!
Too busy reading... I will review every chapter, but i am too infatuated to write anything... his is like christmas come 12 months sooner!
Too busy reading... I will review every chapter, but i am too infatuated to write anything... his is like christmas come 12 months sooner!
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February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you made me cry again. OH FUJI!!!! He is definitely so... i dont know waht to say. I love how you make his character! next!
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February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Atobe sounded like a wise man from East...
anyway, I couldnt wait to see what Tezuka's choice and WHY Yukimura thought he couldnt do it alone with Sanada...
anyway, I couldnt wait to see what Tezuka's choice and WHY Yukimura thought he couldnt do it alone with Sanada...
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February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
do you believe me if i say you are a genius? The last sentence made me chilled... all the wrong reasons.
WOW>
WOW>
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February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
it's dead?
Anyway, YUKI!!! OH! MY G!!!! DDDDXXXX I hate that. i hate that man. whoever he is, i a going to sue him. ARGH!
Anyway, YUKI!!! OH! MY G!!!! DDDDXXXX I hate that. i hate that man. whoever he is, i a going to sue him. ARGH!
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February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
now it's time to properly reviewing your story.
1. I think Atobe was a good glue in between; yet he almost lost his touch. I almost forget he was there.
2. Sanada is an overgrown brat. he lacked compassion but it is good now that he trioed to make it up ~
3. Tezuka. How can I say? All i wanted to do was shout to him and say, bring Fuji back to your house and stop whining! i know Fuji wouldnt mind being his kept lover. eheheheh
4. Yukimura. OMG. His past made me realized why he did all of that. why he needed someone else by his side to make Sanada stay. and he was hurting... OMG> Awesome. I just... i thought he was an insane sadist in your story. Now that i understand, I feel like.. oh. he really tied with Fuji inside my heart.
5. Fuji. ah, I love to speak about him. his depreciation of himself was perfect. he is my fav type of uke chara. he thought he didnt deserve anytthing and do everything just to make people stay. hurting when actually he wasnt meant to be hurt. it was awesome. and the way he tried to help Yukimura was priceless. He was the sole reason I love this story to death. XD
OK now that i have done the characyters, lets go to plot:
1. This is an awesome, perfecly complicated plot. I would be giving up by now, from its complication but you kept through and I think it's really awesome. one thing though; i suggest (and it';s just me) when you post this in ff.net, please combine chapt 20 and 21 together because chapt 20 actually too short/make not much sense. (Sorry, it';s just me. Sorry)
2. i cried almost every chapter. Now you understand why you are so AWESOME!!!! XD I love you to death. you are perfectly sitting in my top two writers (the otehr one being Telanu).
3. the way you wrote it makes me smile. you have the most loveliest writing style--every word counts. I couldnt miss even one to get the next. i am a skipping reader--and i can still make most of it--yet when i read yours i dont want to miss any. Funny that i almost remember word to word from your story (This is my skill; please dont think I am a stalker, LOL!)
4. praise aside, I have nothing more to say. XD
ah, I do, actually. PLEASE UPDATE SOONER! And by sooner i dont mean one year.
1. I think Atobe was a good glue in between; yet he almost lost his touch. I almost forget he was there.
2. Sanada is an overgrown brat. he lacked compassion but it is good now that he trioed to make it up ~
3. Tezuka. How can I say? All i wanted to do was shout to him and say, bring Fuji back to your house and stop whining! i know Fuji wouldnt mind being his kept lover. eheheheh
4. Yukimura. OMG. His past made me realized why he did all of that. why he needed someone else by his side to make Sanada stay. and he was hurting... OMG> Awesome. I just... i thought he was an insane sadist in your story. Now that i understand, I feel like.. oh. he really tied with Fuji inside my heart.
5. Fuji. ah, I love to speak about him. his depreciation of himself was perfect. he is my fav type of uke chara. he thought he didnt deserve anytthing and do everything just to make people stay. hurting when actually he wasnt meant to be hurt. it was awesome. and the way he tried to help Yukimura was priceless. He was the sole reason I love this story to death. XD
OK now that i have done the characyters, lets go to plot:
1. This is an awesome, perfecly complicated plot. I would be giving up by now, from its complication but you kept through and I think it's really awesome. one thing though; i suggest (and it';s just me) when you post this in ff.net, please combine chapt 20 and 21 together because chapt 20 actually too short/make not much sense. (Sorry, it';s just me. Sorry)
2. i cried almost every chapter. Now you understand why you are so AWESOME!!!! XD I love you to death. you are perfectly sitting in my top two writers (the otehr one being Telanu).
3. the way you wrote it makes me smile. you have the most loveliest writing style--every word counts. I couldnt miss even one to get the next. i am a skipping reader--and i can still make most of it--yet when i read yours i dont want to miss any. Funny that i almost remember word to word from your story (This is my skill; please dont think I am a stalker, LOL!)
4. praise aside, I have nothing more to say. XD
ah, I do, actually. PLEASE UPDATE SOONER! And by sooner i dont mean one year.