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for For All the Wrong Reasons

by lemonchai

person danu23
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That went out pretty nicely! I'm dying to know what yukimura's proposition is! And why was Fuji so nice to Yukimura? Please update soon, and keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"The ringing continued, and he decided to sue Utada Hikaru or Paris Hilton or whatever stupid bitch sang such an irritatingly catchy tune."

ROTFL

As for you OT1... *fans self* I am in awe both of Atobe-sama and of yourself. Wow. That was VERY well done! But aaaaaaaaawwwwwwww I can just feel his lonely little soul reaching out for someone to love him!!!

*giggles* So I was half right about the meeting... :p Fuji WAS bound and gagged in a closet-esque situation. :p Too bad about the lack of Yuki/Tezu, but it worked veeeerry nicely anywa. *smiles* Fuji was just too sweet after that!

Oh, man. I couldn't properly picture Yukimura, though. My brain was very unhelpful in supplying me with images of Hogwarts dress robes. @_@ I'm starting to confuse Yukimura and Snape. My mind is a scary place.

As is Atobe's. *giggle* I wonder if Yuki known what Atobe's doing on the other end of the line. Probably, ne?

Wonderful chapter! I'll have to work on Sweet Dreams some more and hopefully force your Tezuka muse back into working order. ^.^
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES it's an UPDATE!! UPDATE!! You have no idea how glad i was when i saw the update. =D Haha. Great work once again but.. this story seems to be taking another route.. one not leading to Tezuka!! FUJI!! * cries * hahaha.. the Atobe part should be interesting. Can't wait for more!! Keep up the good work!!
person Mick
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY UPDATE!! :) I'm so happy now that I took the time to review. Normally, I'm just a lurker.

I loved how Atobe was introduced; the passage began and I was all "OMG NARCISSTIC ATOBE!"
I've never seen OT1 written, and I can't write to save my life, but I love Atobe in your fic.
Much arrogance and angst. But wanting to be loved.

Looking forward to Chapter 6! XD
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ArghhhHH!! What a cliffhanger. No no no!!! I'm a die hard Tez/Fuji fan so please let them end up together if only for a short while and Sanada to get back with his ex. Then you can have a foursome!! hahaha.. but just update pleaseee!! Don't torture the lovely tensai anymore!!!! * sniff sniff * abd great writing. =D
person Mick
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My god! I just read this story, and I LOVE IT. I'm especially fond of how Fuji is written, and how he just can't get away from Yukimura. Update soon, please! :)
person Anon
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I went through three stages...

One: "the bluenette" BUWAHAHAHAHA!!! *dies laughing* I did a double take before I actually got that one...

Two: *purrs* Mmmmmm Fuji...

Three: Too short! Too short! Too short!!!!!

So... Fuji's having mushy, Tezuka feelings again? ***.*** Sounds like Tezuka trying reeeaaaaally hard to like Sanada... Well, maybe not that hard, but he's also trying hard to convince himself he's not trying hard... Yep, I'm confused.

... So Yukimura arranged with Fuji at 4 and Tezuka at 5... That probably means Fuji's tied up in a closet, chained and gagged and that Yukimura's about to seduce Tezuka right under Fuji's listening ears... Right? RIGHT?

... No? Oh well, I trust you to entertain me anyway... XD
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see this updated, and you didn't disappoint. Quality writing gave us some more insight on Tezuka's motives and intent and even the lovely little scence with Fuji was revealing considering what was being pictured in his mind. Needless to say, I loved it and can't wait to see what happens next!
person Anon
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Part 2:

XD Berserk!!!

Aaaaanyways... ^.^ Very well done. The Fuji/Yukimura scene was just right. ^.^ (For my tastes anyway)

Sorry it's taken me so long to get round to reading and reviewing but eh. Uni and all that.

(I'll be onto Part 3 soon enough.)
person Anon
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Part 3:

^.^ Short works at 2:00am :P

Yup! Not clear at all! *tears out hair* Are they in love? Do they hate each other? (probably not) Is Yukimura going to make Tezuka watch? XD Sadistic bastard...

Looking forward to the next chapter. (Though when I'll be able to read it's a mystery.)

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