rate_review Reviews

I think I liked the second chapter even more than the first which I just didn't think would be possible! Your character interaction is great and the smut was yummy. I can't wait for more!

Oh,poor Fuji! <3

^.^ I love it! I really do!

I've been wondering why everyone always neglects Yukimura in these pairings. He's so perfect!

Man, where to begin?

Well, first of all, I love the Fuji/Yukimura pairing. First I've ever found and I haven't gotten around to writing it yet, but I can feel the tingles of inspiration somewhere around my toes... Anyways, very cute with the kitten metaphor.

Sanada seems a touch out of character, but then again, I haven't read/written much involving Sanada so I'm not up to date on the fandomization.

I do so hope this is going to become a nice long, complicated fic with lots of backstory! Probably not, ne? Oh well, simple and hot works, too.

I'd LOVE to see Atobe in this. I really would. With lots of angst attached.

You're a very good writer, and with practice, I can see the kinks eventually dissolving. [Don't take this as criticism. There are habits that come with reading fanfiction that everyone sheds the more they write.] Please forgive me, but I like to comment on the technical aspects of authors with a lot of potential.

Oh, and just to finish off... XD The bondage was well done, but for god's sake! Be more visual!!!!!!!!! I can't take the suspense! I wanna know exactly what Yukimura is doing to our dearest kitty cat!

Krystal_Epyon

This is very well written and has certainly caught my attention. I'm looking forward to an update so I can find out what happens next!