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for For All the Wrong Reasons

by lemonchai

person JKL1993
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! That was amazing! For some reason I kept imagining Fuji as a girl with all his seducing. Gah, I also loved Sanada in this chapter and how you described his abs. lol I can't wait for more orgies to come!! Also, can you make Tezuka become a little sadistic in a way, like he wants to assert his control or is fed up with all this sex.
person yellow22
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. Thanks for the update. Please don't make us wait so long for the next one :)
person missella
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Stupid captain muse... -runs around shooting captain muse- There, no more problems with captain muse.

-waits patiently for next chapter-

Yay! I like people who update. Their better then people who don't. Well, obviously. And people who reply to reviews! They rock twice as hard! Yay!

And and and... I can't wait for next chapter, ESPECIALLY if there's gonna be some Sanaxfuji action in it.
person JklL1993
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's ok :) This chapter was really great. I loved the scene with Tezuka and Yukimura and Atobe just sleeping in the background. I think it builds up tension, making us wait for thatbig lemon. lol. But I really loved the ending with Fuji laughing. He's sooo the slut of Seigaku. I can't wait for your update. Please be soon!
person missella
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah! This story is awesomo... Don't know if you're still writing, but this story is great... I've only read one other OT5 story, and that one had Ryoma... but it was terrible. And I'm more of a Yukimura person anyway. Plus the other one started with them all together then they all broke apart at the end. This ones the other way around, which is why I think I like it so much. But Atobe was much more involved in the last one, and I also think I like his detachment in this one, even though he wants to 'attach' himself more. Plus I like the concept you've got going, and your a good writer. Keep up the good work.
person Jkl1993
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love your story so much! I read it when I'm in a bad mood lol! This is probably the best moresome fics I've ever read. The way you describe Fuji as ulimate uke, I totally love how you write Tezuka, he's so overprotected of himeslf and the pure virginity (even though it's dead) of everone. Yukimura is EVIL! (even though he alread was) and Sanada's good too. Atobe...don't get me started on him! Anyways, I can't wait for the new chapter. you have amazing writing (especiall lemon writing talents lol.) Keep up the good work :)
person drmsr
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah the last chapters were great the interaction between the characters was great and the atofuji flash back was hot but i feel sorry for atobe ;_____; fuji should have tried to love him instead of using him as tezuka's replacement >.< still can't wait for the sanafuji lemon XDD soo looking forward to it and YES!!!!! everyone should have sex with fuji alone and all at the same time xDD looking for the next chapter :D

-MYSILV
person Alice
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a nice flashback. Too bad my wish didn't come true :( Sanada better not faint this time!
person yellow22
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
15/ oh my! I want more! You are evil to stop there. And might I add you are so twisted X)
person yellow22
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch 14/ wow.. interesting chapter. I look forward to the next. Please update soon! :)

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