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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh shyit... an omake too... and i missed everything!!!
wait until i finish reading everything okay. then i'll give you a nice review... ja ne.
wait until i finish reading everything okay. then i'll give you a nice review... ja ne.
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
KYAAAAA!!!! A tezufuji smut! The best New Year presents evah! Oh Yukimura is so cute too!!! *glomps lemon and chai and keeps on screaming coz she’s so happy*
Ehem… now on with the reviews:
Chapter 12:
Nice ending you got there… ^^;;; leaving the readers’ jaw hanging in a silent “NOoooo!!!” Fufuufuufufu. (oh, I’m sure I know the feeling coz I’m one of them. Lol)
All in all, it’s a fun chapter to read. Love the scene when Fuji’s mother discovered the trashed bedroom, and Atobe is cute. The way he wants to join with the commoner’s way of life... but simply doesn’t know how. Your Atobe is really, really cute!
Hmm… I just wanna make sure, so there’s no way Sanada and Yukimura can be in good terms like before? Because Sanada sure seems like he still loves Yukimura but keeps on denying it. It’s like Sanada is trying his very best to rejects Yukimura. I mean, if you loves that person, just except that you loves them. What’s the point of denying, coz it’s not like that person knows. It’s just between you and your own heart… right? If you want that person to know, just confess. If not, stay quiet. That’s what I thought anyway. When I think about it, maybe Fuji is thinking the same way – “When there’s nothing you can do, just keep quiet and accept things as they are”.
But maybe I was wrong. Maybe what Sanada feels toward Yukimura is hatred. Or it’s Yukimura that still clings to the remnants of their dying love – unable to change anything.
Another thing that I do realize in this fic is that, among all, Yukimura is a fighter…
He fights against his sickness…
He fights against his failures…
He fights against his losses….
Unlike Yukimura, Fuji is totally lost. He tried to patch up his broken heart, but he didn’t fight for himself. He just follows around, hoping to find some solace in another embraces, although he knew he will never find one.
As for Tezuka and Sanada, to tell you the truth I still can’t understand this character. They are fighting against something I can’t understand. I mean, their life would be easier if they just ignore Yukimura and Fuji, but nooooo they wanted to be the heroes. *imagines little Sanada said “when I grow up I wanna be superheroes!” *
Atobe; he’s a neutral zone. Like the clouds. He didn’t fight for anything (since he basically got whatever he wants) and all that matters to him now is a good satisfying sex. I don’t know if he ever feel sympathize towards his lovers relationship, or towards Fuji, but if he did, he never show it. I think. ^^;;;
Anyway, thank you so much for the omake!!! It’s cute! It’s fun! It’s TezuFuji! Yay!!! Happy new year!
Ehem… now on with the reviews:
Chapter 12:
Nice ending you got there… ^^;;; leaving the readers’ jaw hanging in a silent “NOoooo!!!” Fufuufuufufu. (oh, I’m sure I know the feeling coz I’m one of them. Lol)
All in all, it’s a fun chapter to read. Love the scene when Fuji’s mother discovered the trashed bedroom, and Atobe is cute. The way he wants to join with the commoner’s way of life... but simply doesn’t know how. Your Atobe is really, really cute!
Hmm… I just wanna make sure, so there’s no way Sanada and Yukimura can be in good terms like before? Because Sanada sure seems like he still loves Yukimura but keeps on denying it. It’s like Sanada is trying his very best to rejects Yukimura. I mean, if you loves that person, just except that you loves them. What’s the point of denying, coz it’s not like that person knows. It’s just between you and your own heart… right? If you want that person to know, just confess. If not, stay quiet. That’s what I thought anyway. When I think about it, maybe Fuji is thinking the same way – “When there’s nothing you can do, just keep quiet and accept things as they are”.
But maybe I was wrong. Maybe what Sanada feels toward Yukimura is hatred. Or it’s Yukimura that still clings to the remnants of their dying love – unable to change anything.
Another thing that I do realize in this fic is that, among all, Yukimura is a fighter…
He fights against his sickness…
He fights against his failures…
He fights against his losses….
Unlike Yukimura, Fuji is totally lost. He tried to patch up his broken heart, but he didn’t fight for himself. He just follows around, hoping to find some solace in another embraces, although he knew he will never find one.
As for Tezuka and Sanada, to tell you the truth I still can’t understand this character. They are fighting against something I can’t understand. I mean, their life would be easier if they just ignore Yukimura and Fuji, but nooooo they wanted to be the heroes. *imagines little Sanada said “when I grow up I wanna be superheroes!” *
Atobe; he’s a neutral zone. Like the clouds. He didn’t fight for anything (since he basically got whatever he wants) and all that matters to him now is a good satisfying sex. I don’t know if he ever feel sympathize towards his lovers relationship, or towards Fuji, but if he did, he never show it. I think. ^^;;;
Anyway, thank you so much for the omake!!! It’s cute! It’s fun! It’s TezuFuji! Yay!!! Happy new year!
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First of all: "Atobe looked like he wanted to help, but just wasn't sure how luggage could be carried without servants."
*DIES LAUGHING*
Nice chapter, I'm looking forward to Fuji's story. ^.^ (Is that wrong of me? XD)
Meanwhile... OMG the omake was purrfect! Yukimura is so evil and cunning, and Tezuka is just so naive! How could Yuki resist the temptation?
Besides, ribbon is MUCH cheaper than buying a present. ^.^
*DIES LAUGHING*
Nice chapter, I'm looking forward to Fuji's story. ^.^ (Is that wrong of me? XD)
Meanwhile... OMG the omake was purrfect! Yukimura is so evil and cunning, and Tezuka is just so naive! How could Yuki resist the temptation?
Besides, ribbon is MUCH cheaper than buying a present. ^.^
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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omake addition - :) thanks!
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the new chapter! YEAH!
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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, indeed, it'd be a shame to have to delete them seeing they ARE rather crucial to the whole plot! Oh my, sometimes I just forget how much fun Atobe is, he WANTED to help but couldn't quite manage it...
Oh I'm so looking foward to the omakje and to a next chapter, it''s so good. I wonmder what aYukimura's going to do, I love that mother side of his. It makes him look gentle, even when he's so jelaous of Tezuka, bbut wel, I suppose Tezuka and Fuji are sort of meant to be...it makes sense, but TYukimura and Fuji would make even more sense if Yukimura just weren't so saddistic, but well, that's life!
Lovely chap, hope you update soooooooooon!
Oh I'm so looking foward to the omakje and to a next chapter, it''s so good. I wonmder what aYukimura's going to do, I love that mother side of his. It makes him look gentle, even when he's so jelaous of Tezuka, bbut wel, I suppose Tezuka and Fuji are sort of meant to be...it makes sense, but TYukimura and Fuji would make even more sense if Yukimura just weren't so saddistic, but well, that's life!
Lovely chap, hope you update soooooooooon!
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the 2nd review for chapter 11. sorry for the pending 2nd review. my connection fails.
Hmm… it’s true that fuji use his parent’s room because it’s larger and because it has bigger bed. But it makes me wonder, if atobe and yukimura never went to fuji’s house before (and they’re the 3rd and 5th boyfriend), it implies that it might be the same with his 2nd and 4th, right? Does this mean that, besides tezuka, nobody else has the privilege to be in fuji’s room too? So… why the secrecy? Is there anything in fuji’s room that he didn’t want his other bf to see? *suspicious* Nfu…
Anyway, nothing sizzling yet it seems (thanks to a certain baka who faints all the way *glares at sanada*) but all in all a promising beginning and better, a fast chapter! OMG, thank you for the fast updates, and I’ll wait patiently for the drooling moment of the next chapter.
Good luck playing with 5 hot naked bishies! Nfu!
p/s: umm.. can I make a little request? Umm… if it’s possible, I really hope to see a loving moment between fuji and tezuka even a very short ones, at least let tezuka knows that fuji really really loves him (being the only one that he loves and all that jazz… if fuji really breaks down and cry it will be super!). From what I understand from your fic, fuji cares for all his boyfriends, but he only loves tezuka (as claimed by Atobe and Fuji himself). Ne, ne, please, pwetty please… *big round teary kitty eyes*
Hmm… it’s true that fuji use his parent’s room because it’s larger and because it has bigger bed. But it makes me wonder, if atobe and yukimura never went to fuji’s house before (and they’re the 3rd and 5th boyfriend), it implies that it might be the same with his 2nd and 4th, right? Does this mean that, besides tezuka, nobody else has the privilege to be in fuji’s room too? So… why the secrecy? Is there anything in fuji’s room that he didn’t want his other bf to see? *suspicious* Nfu…
Anyway, nothing sizzling yet it seems (thanks to a certain baka who faints all the way *glares at sanada*) but all in all a promising beginning and better, a fast chapter! OMG, thank you for the fast updates, and I’ll wait patiently for the drooling moment of the next chapter.
Good luck playing with 5 hot naked bishies! Nfu!
p/s: umm.. can I make a little request? Umm… if it’s possible, I really hope to see a loving moment between fuji and tezuka even a very short ones, at least let tezuka knows that fuji really really loves him (being the only one that he loves and all that jazz… if fuji really breaks down and cry it will be super!). From what I understand from your fic, fuji cares for all his boyfriends, but he only loves tezuka (as claimed by Atobe and Fuji himself). Ne, ne, please, pwetty please… *big round teary kitty eyes*
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He..he… the second review for chapter 10, as promised. fufufuufufu.
“When Yukimura did not look like a tiger ready to pounce, his natural beauty shimmered through and brought out the reflexive function from within Tezuka to take care of those who were in need” – oh dear, just admit it tezuka, you have soft spot for pretty elfin guys. Fufuuu…
awww, memories of tezuka and fuji together. *cries*
yukimura loves fuji too! Now only sanada left! *starts to wonder if the title will change to ‘everybody loves fuji’…* o_O;;;
“He couldn't believe that earlier he'd felt sorry for this imp. Yukimura was a devil with a pretty face.” – there you go, the proof for my earlier statement. Fufufufuu…
well, that’s all for chapter 10. ^_^. Although it doesn’t have much action, I like it because it features tezuka’s memories of fuji, albeit his lack of exterior expression.
And I learnt that tezuka fancy pretty people. Maybe he doesn’t make a move on sanada because he’s not pretty enough. *evil bitchy thoughts* Nfu!
Btw, I’m sorry if I noticed strange things and it somehow hit the mark. It’s just me thinking too much, and you don’t really have to change your plots whatsoever. I enjoy reading everything you wrote, and it’s enough of anticipation for me to wait for your updates. ^_^. So do your best and see you next time.
“When Yukimura did not look like a tiger ready to pounce, his natural beauty shimmered through and brought out the reflexive function from within Tezuka to take care of those who were in need” – oh dear, just admit it tezuka, you have soft spot for pretty elfin guys. Fufuuu…
awww, memories of tezuka and fuji together. *cries*
yukimura loves fuji too! Now only sanada left! *starts to wonder if the title will change to ‘everybody loves fuji’…* o_O;;;
“He couldn't believe that earlier he'd felt sorry for this imp. Yukimura was a devil with a pretty face.” – there you go, the proof for my earlier statement. Fufufufuu…
well, that’s all for chapter 10. ^_^. Although it doesn’t have much action, I like it because it features tezuka’s memories of fuji, albeit his lack of exterior expression.
And I learnt that tezuka fancy pretty people. Maybe he doesn’t make a move on sanada because he’s not pretty enough. *evil bitchy thoughts* Nfu!
Btw, I’m sorry if I noticed strange things and it somehow hit the mark. It’s just me thinking too much, and you don’t really have to change your plots whatsoever. I enjoy reading everything you wrote, and it’s enough of anticipation for me to wait for your updates. ^_^. So do your best and see you next time.
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yoohooo… it’s me again.
Really, sanada no baka…
And I thought that he had a great stamina… geh.
And because of him, we missed half the fun too. Damn. *pokes Sanada’s butt with butt plug*. I guess seeing his ex kissing dirtily with his boyfriend and sexy slutty fuji blows his mind, literally. Wimp, they haven’t really started yet, and atobe’s just sucking his pinky, man!
Tezuka, well he was writhing heavenly under yukimura, shooting his seeds and all that jazz, nothing distinctly hostile. (what with all that dramatic prapparumba claiming “I didn’t break up with you so that you’ll be hurt by others…”) -_-;;; *tsk…tsk…tsk*
Yumiko… does know that his little brother is a playboy ‘guy killer’ (opposite of ‘lady killer’) right? She must be proud of him! First the hawt tezuka, then 3 more appears, and they’re from different schools too! Fufufuu… the prowess of fuji Syusuke.
Wait, I think I have more to say. I’ll continue it in the second review. btw. i hope you got this review since my connection sucks like hell.
Really, sanada no baka…
And I thought that he had a great stamina… geh.
And because of him, we missed half the fun too. Damn. *pokes Sanada’s butt with butt plug*. I guess seeing his ex kissing dirtily with his boyfriend and sexy slutty fuji blows his mind, literally. Wimp, they haven’t really started yet, and atobe’s just sucking his pinky, man!
Tezuka, well he was writhing heavenly under yukimura, shooting his seeds and all that jazz, nothing distinctly hostile. (what with all that dramatic prapparumba claiming “I didn’t break up with you so that you’ll be hurt by others…”) -_-;;; *tsk…tsk…tsk*
Yumiko… does know that his little brother is a playboy ‘guy killer’ (opposite of ‘lady killer’) right? She must be proud of him! First the hawt tezuka, then 3 more appears, and they’re from different schools too! Fufufuu… the prowess of fuji Syusuke.
Wait, I think I have more to say. I’ll continue it in the second review. btw. i hope you got this review since my connection sucks like hell.
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol You could always repost it here, too. :p God knows the general standard beats the hell outta FF.net...
Anyways...
Nfufufu. XD Nope, DEFINITELY not working out their problems, but definitely working out SOMETHING! Damn it! I wanna know how they convinced Tezuka, you cheat!!! Rather, I wanna *see* how they convinced Tezuka. XD Cause I'm sure it had to do with lots of touching and kissing and licking to make him that comfortable... XD
Hurry up and update again!!! (Yeah, I know, I'm a hypocrite...)
Anyways...
Nfufufu. XD Nope, DEFINITELY not working out their problems, but definitely working out SOMETHING! Damn it! I wanna know how they convinced Tezuka, you cheat!!! Rather, I wanna *see* how they convinced Tezuka. XD Cause I'm sure it had to do with lots of touching and kissing and licking to make him that comfortable... XD
Hurry up and update again!!! (Yeah, I know, I'm a hypocrite...)