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""I am probably gonna post this fic on fanfiction(dot)net, with plot hole edits and better english and more details and extra scenes.""

Why would you post an edited version there and not here? I would like to read an edited version too.

Aw I loved the first part! It was so nice to see Yukimura re-think some things. Tezuka is so naughty! That was fun, but I can't help but wonder if Sanada suffers from epilepsy or something along those lines...I mean he's fainting quite a lot, isn't he? LOL

I wish we could've been told how on earth was Tezuka finally convinced to get into that orgy, he doesn't look leike he likes those. Great chap, once again, and I'm so looking foward to your post in fanfiction. Though I suppose you'll delete all those sex scenes, right? 'Cause ff.net only allows R-rated stories...well, anyways, I hope you'll be posting this there soon! Update soooooooooooooooooooooooon

PS: My cravings WERE satisfied

Thank you for the dedication! The scence was good and entertaining.

What happened to your lips?"

ROTFLMAO

Sorry, had to get that out of the way...

Anyways... I agree with Yuki-muse!!! Time for smmmmut! XD (Not that I didn't enjoy the chapter. Poor Yuki-puppy.)

Actually, you know I 'could' see Atobe riding the train with one of those 'I'm curious as to how peasants travel' excuses. :p

*pouts* Have I mentioned that I don't like Sanada? And people call Tezuka emotionless! *huffs* Erm, that was a bit off topic...

Anyways, thanks for pushing through, my darling. ^.^ Can't wait for more! Though god knows I probably won't be able to read it till my next day off. >.<

OMG new chapter!!!!!!!!! *howl with glee*

*reads... reads....*

okay. fuji is still alive, that's a good sign. ^_^ btw, i just realized that, fuji have been with everybody; tezuka, atobe, and yukimura, except sanada. hehhehehe.. so sanada will have a taste on the heavenly sex that is fuji. fufufuufufuffuuuuu...

then he'll know the prowess of fuji syusuke (he must be wondering why everybody is so concerned with fuji neh? even atobe admit that he'll never get bored with fuji!)

but i really wish that tezuka will show more expression concerning his ex. his uncaring facade really tiring me out. *punch tezuka again* thick headed imp!

ahhnn~ (atobe style ^_~)... can't really give more comments on this chapter (the fact that aff.net is kinda 'review unfriendly' really gave me a hard time). i'll read it again and give you another feedback okay. besides, it's 2 am and my head is pounding.

thanks for the dedication! (fuji cuffed to the bed prevent him from killing himself it seems ^_^) thank you! i'm glad that the double review works. however, you can expect another review for this chapter. there's something tingling at the back of my head but i can't think of it now, so i have to read this chapter again. (i've read your story 3 times; all chapters back to back, and maybe that explains my scrutinizing comments... ^_^;;, can't help it. i really love your story!)

ja, mata ne. nfu!

SQUEE!!!: But his lover had lost all his energy, his fingers wrapping loosely around Fuji's throat in an enervated attempt to at least bruise.
"I would tighten my grip, if I had the strength," the bluenette sighed, giving up and letting his hand fall limply to his side.

I LOVED that!!! I really did! XD

The whole chapter was just made of awesomeness! The scene between Tezuka and Fuji so so sweet and perfect. ^.^ And Atobe's a manipulative bastard. *giggles* Utada Hikaru? He's gonna kill Gakuto.

Awwww Yuki!!!! He's being good! That's so sweet!

And Sanada and Tezuka heard him!!!!! EEEEEEEEE!!!!

And... and... ROTFL Your comment actually made me laugh out loud. Yes, they are a bit of a therapy group, aren't they? Actually, I find that happening in most of my fics too. Therapy followed by sex. ^.^

Awww, and Fuji's all alone at Yuki's house wondering what's so wrong with him that Yuki won't even kill him!!! How mean!!!! XD

now, now, isn't this getting better and better by the second? Great chap! I can't help but understand Atobe.I mean, I'd be drooling all over my face if I ever saw such a sight! I hate Yukimura's muther, she's so rude and idiotic, it bugs me. And I'm glad to see Yukimura does appreciate Fuji, when you describe them like that they sound like a rather nice and spicy couple.
Although I do agree it was far too short for my cravings! LOL. I can't wait to see what's going to happen at Fuji's house.

i know this is cheating but........... i ... i... want more... T_T *runs*

oh my! That was quick enough! LOL
I wonder what's going to happen to Yukimura next! It's so terrible for his parents to be so unaware of his need for SOME attention! That's just messed up, but well....I love Atobe being all neutral! It suits him rather niecely. So I'm guessing Sanada still has feelings for Yukimura and Yukimura for Sanada, they really have to work out their problems...specially Yuikimura!
That was awesome. Keep it up!

firstly, thank you for the fast updates. i love it ^_^

secondly, awww... poor fuji, rejected by tezuka... again. and yukimura just run away. *punches insensitive tezuka*. god, he really was blown away like a fallen leaves. can't tezuka feel anything at all? i won't even blink my eyes if they found fuji's dead on yukimura's bed after consuming a bottle of sleeping pills or slit his wrist (but that would be suck to clean the mess - don't slit your wrist in your bf's bed. he would be furious)... damn, reading his rejection really hurts like hell (and i have nothing to do with their relationship at all... -_-;;;;)

thirdly, okay, so tezuka left fuji because he raped him? no wonder fuji is a masochist. maybe his first and last loving memory of tezuka is when he was raped. sexual tension to the max!

fourthly, damn sanada! he's an egoistical freak. poor yukimura, unsatisfied and stuck up with inflexible boyfriend. *punches sanada*. yukimura should stay with atobe instead. he can provides all of yukimura's needs... it seems. oh yeah, sanada is really a poor story teller.

fifthly, i hope i'll never see a "love making scene" between sanada and tezuka. i can imagine that it will be a disaster (what with tezuka's past experience of rapes and unskilled inflexible sanada, uhhh the horror!) atobe must be in between them. at least he can act as the buffer zone (neutral territory, heh).

ahhh... and lastly, i wish atobe's happiness with tons of bishies to fuck around. W000000T!!!!

fast updates again, yey! go baby go!