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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful. though I thought you would've shown us Fuji's beating scence.
Wanted to see it, actually. Ah well, please update Soon!!
Wanted to see it, actually. Ah well, please update Soon!!
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROTFL Yuki-muse? Out of control? .... Never.... XD
Heheheheh. Great chapter. (Smut isn't everything, though a very nice bonus. :p)
I loved the psychological turmoil going on with Yukimura. He was a perfect, angsty teen. ^.^ I'm definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes. I wonder, will Fuji's screams bring the trio outside running in to save him? XD
Heheheheh. Great chapter. (Smut isn't everything, though a very nice bonus. :p)
I loved the psychological turmoil going on with Yukimura. He was a perfect, angsty teen. ^.^ I'm definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes. I wonder, will Fuji's screams bring the trio outside running in to save him? XD
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I ADORE Atobe! He's like my fav character and yes, ore-sama ccan do anything he'd like perfectkly, even being a bottom! L0L!
So, I guess we all understand why Yukimura is how he is and blah (what a crazy motther)! Poor sweet little boy. Tha part of Fuji to the rescue was the oddest thing I've ever read, but it was good. And in god's name is Atobe going to talk to Sanada and Tezuka about? Those two should just stop butting in Fuji's sex life, it's none of their bloody business! I hope you update reaaaaaallyyyy sooon!!
So, I guess we all understand why Yukimura is how he is and blah (what a crazy motther)! Poor sweet little boy. Tha part of Fuji to the rescue was the oddest thing I've ever read, but it was good. And in god's name is Atobe going to talk to Sanada and Tezuka about? Those two should just stop butting in Fuji's sex life, it's none of their bloody business! I hope you update reaaaaaallyyyy sooon!!
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hello, thank you for the wonderful chapter. i really love your story coz it's interesting.
umm... i don't know if i'm mistaken, but from what i read, it was like yukimura is in the state of denial. it seems like yukimura resorts to violence because he wants to show sanada that he's not weak. besides sanada distances himself from yukimura since he was sick, and maybe it hurt yukimura so much without sanada's knowing it. maybe he's blaming his sickness, his weakness as the reason why sanada distances himself from him. he wants to show that he's strong but the same times he's hurting and hating himself instead.
and fuji. he seems to love tezuka so much that when tezuka left him, he's just a hollow entity. he lost his heart, and by losing it, he needs something that make him feel alive - be it an extreme pleasure, or an extreme pain. when there's an accumulation of sadness, disappointment and pain in one's heart, happiness seems like it is a far fetched dream. besides, someone like fuji who have smiles as his masked, will he ever feel alive again?
did tezuka ever loved fuji? can't sanada see that he's tormenting yukimura?
can somebody really save them both? i think it's already too late. even if tezuka and sanada decided to be with yukimura and fuji back, the pain won't heal. it will stay scarred in their hearts. the pain and suffering will traumatized them both.
i wonder...
umm... i don't know if i'm mistaken, but from what i read, it was like yukimura is in the state of denial. it seems like yukimura resorts to violence because he wants to show sanada that he's not weak. besides sanada distances himself from yukimura since he was sick, and maybe it hurt yukimura so much without sanada's knowing it. maybe he's blaming his sickness, his weakness as the reason why sanada distances himself from him. he wants to show that he's strong but the same times he's hurting and hating himself instead.
and fuji. he seems to love tezuka so much that when tezuka left him, he's just a hollow entity. he lost his heart, and by losing it, he needs something that make him feel alive - be it an extreme pleasure, or an extreme pain. when there's an accumulation of sadness, disappointment and pain in one's heart, happiness seems like it is a far fetched dream. besides, someone like fuji who have smiles as his masked, will he ever feel alive again?
did tezuka ever loved fuji? can't sanada see that he's tormenting yukimura?
can somebody really save them both? i think it's already too late. even if tezuka and sanada decided to be with yukimura and fuji back, the pain won't heal. it will stay scarred in their hearts. the pain and suffering will traumatized them both.
i wonder...
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the pairings! Well done!
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh, warning... This review's over a page long in word. (There was so much I had to say that I took notes. ^.^ :p)
Whee!!! A dedication! XD Made my day! :3
--- “Yuki-mama says he's always good. ... D: *runs away in fear*”
...
A wise decision, methinks.
--- “"You always go for the captains,"”
Damn. That is so true.
“...” (<< Me being speechless) Hoh my god that was sexy. Mmmm * gets all Ato/Fuji fuzzy* I looooove the way you write them. Specially Atobe. You have a flair for his personality that I just can’t quite achieve.
--- “"Do you really like it?" Atobe pressed further, though it seemed he already knew the answer. Fuji squirmed in response.
--- "Want to find out?"”
*giggles* I thought that was Fuji. I was all like “YES! Go Fuji!” and then I found out it was Yuki… and I was all like “YES! GO YUKI!”
--- “Oh, that's right... the reason Fuji always had so much fun on dates with Atobe was because they were both cats - curious to a fault.”
Now... What’d I say about curiosity and cats? :p
DAMN Sanada is RUDE! :p
--- “Atobe decided to grace them all with the presence of his bare chest,”
*GIGGLES UNCONTROLLABLY* THAT line was pure genius!
That lemon was... “ ” (<
--- “He clicked off the lights with a snap of his fingers.”
He would SO have a system like that!!!
And sure Fuji gets to top… There’s Eiji, and Ryouma, and Yuuta… There’s always more of an uke. Unless you’re Ryouma. He doesn’t get to be that manly. ^.^
Wow. Brilliant fucking chapter. I think you woke my muses up... *goes off to have a little looksie at Sweet Dreams*
Whee!!! A dedication! XD Made my day! :3
--- “Yuki-mama says he's always good. ... D: *runs away in fear*”
...
A wise decision, methinks.
--- “"You always go for the captains,"”
Damn. That is so true.
“...” (<< Me being speechless) Hoh my god that was sexy. Mmmm * gets all Ato/Fuji fuzzy* I looooove the way you write them. Specially Atobe. You have a flair for his personality that I just can’t quite achieve.
--- “"Do you really like it?" Atobe pressed further, though it seemed he already knew the answer. Fuji squirmed in response.
--- "Want to find out?"”
*giggles* I thought that was Fuji. I was all like “YES! Go Fuji!” and then I found out it was Yuki… and I was all like “YES! GO YUKI!”
--- “Oh, that's right... the reason Fuji always had so much fun on dates with Atobe was because they were both cats - curious to a fault.”
Now... What’d I say about curiosity and cats? :p
DAMN Sanada is RUDE! :p
--- “Atobe decided to grace them all with the presence of his bare chest,”
*GIGGLES UNCONTROLLABLY* THAT line was pure genius!
That lemon was... “ ” (<
--- “He clicked off the lights with a snap of his fingers.”
He would SO have a system like that!!!
And sure Fuji gets to top… There’s Eiji, and Ryouma, and Yuuta… There’s always more of an uke. Unless you’re Ryouma. He doesn’t get to be that manly. ^.^
Wow. Brilliant fucking chapter. I think you woke my muses up... *goes off to have a little looksie at Sweet Dreams*
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It cut off my review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh well... I'll have to email it.
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a threesome!! Poor Fuji! I'm dying to read about Atobe bottoming for anyone...I mean,that's quite a sight.Great chap! The Sanada thing was so sad, but then again, they really weren't meant for each other. Update soooooon!!
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Well... I guess it was really..." Leaning closer, the brunette whispered into his lover's ear.
A smirk stretched across Yukimura's lips. The answer intrigued him.
Nani? Naaaaaaaaaaaaaani? *pouts* Nani wo itta yo!
Somehow I get the feeling it involves SOMETHING to do with a threesome with Atobe, but just what in the hell did he say? Not fair. This is a fatal assault. Curiosity kills cats and I'm a Leo!!!
But you did make up for it... XD Why oh why did I enjoy Sanada shoving Yuki up against a locker so damn much?
And yay. :3 I was really hoping Yuki would give Fuji a break for once. (Dunno why, it's rather an odd sentiment for me, but it just seemed about time. :p) And yet again, you pulled through. =^.^=
Poor Sanada. He always gets the short end of the stick... Oh well. Actually, I'm more worried about Tezuka. o.o; Is he gonna get broken up with? I hope not. Not until he's back on Yuki's good side, that is... Er, does Yuki 'have' a good side? :p
Mmmm All inspired now. Off I go...
A smirk stretched across Yukimura's lips. The answer intrigued him.
Nani? Naaaaaaaaaaaaaani? *pouts* Nani wo itta yo!
Somehow I get the feeling it involves SOMETHING to do with a threesome with Atobe, but just what in the hell did he say? Not fair. This is a fatal assault. Curiosity kills cats and I'm a Leo!!!
But you did make up for it... XD Why oh why did I enjoy Sanada shoving Yuki up against a locker so damn much?
And yay. :3 I was really hoping Yuki would give Fuji a break for once. (Dunno why, it's rather an odd sentiment for me, but it just seemed about time. :p) And yet again, you pulled through. =^.^=
Poor Sanada. He always gets the short end of the stick... Oh well. Actually, I'm more worried about Tezuka. o.o; Is he gonna get broken up with? I hope not. Not until he's back on Yuki's good side, that is... Er, does Yuki 'have' a good side? :p
Mmmm All inspired now. Off I go...
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's a pretty good theory. You know, I'm wondering, what on earth did Fuji tell Yukimura for the latter to be THAT satisfied...what a mystery! It was a lovely chap...I definetely enjoyed the FujiYukimura part. However I do think Yukimura stammering after the whole Snada incident is a bit off character. I mean, he's supposed to be one to collect himself quite quickly and that was sort weak for him...Anyways, I'm waiting for Ore-sama's appearance! That should be something! Great chap!