rate_review Reviews

This is a good start to a potentially great story. It would be a pleasure to read more of such a good story.

interesting please update soon.

i think her special pokemon she gets should be gardevoir and i think she should fuck it

Well...its hard to say how good this is...there's not very much, is there? Do you plan to make more?

I will write more of prma later on and some new stuff that's all mine like one about a girl wjos becomes the gim repaer and has to blance her new job and love life

With Love, Iamsuky Lomae

Cool, thanks for responding to my review! ^__^ I do hope you'll have Rain in it again because she was very neat like I said, plus if she's around then Misty and Delia can't be far off and they're total milfs! Anyways please write more soon, all your stuff is fun but it's when you make original characters that everything is awesome, like Lilith and the person you see as in Pram's Plaything! Those are probably my favorites but I'm sure Pink will join them! Speaking of that will there be any more Pram's Plaything or is that done? Sure hope there's more coming eventually! Thanks for reading bye!

Hey glad to see you're still going to give your original ideas for this thing a try, just because you don't succeed at first doesn't mean you shouldn't keep trying! Will this be totally different from the first Pink fic or will there be some similarities, because there are parts from the first that I'd still like to see. Like that girl I forget her name, she is raised by Misty and Delia, and she has a crush on Delia. That was good stuff, not only was it hot (a lot!) but it also had potential to be very interesting in how it would develop itself, you know? Of course you know, you're the author, lol. Well anyways, please update soon!

There will be some similaritiesbut not many that girl was named rain she might show up later not to sure just yst but there will be a new person showing up in a few chapters all i'll say for nor foul mouthed ninja girl.

With Love, Imasuky Lomae

Niiice! AWanna see more x3 I Really like Midori, maybe it's cause she's a but of a klutz it would seem. Can't wait to see her starter, my guess is.... A Dark type? Dragon type?

I apologize too. I think I was a little too harsh with how I said things to you.