rate_review Reviews

interesting new story. looking forward to more.
your humble servant and fan
-Twisteddarkness-

You have a point, I haven't given this story a fair chance. I guess I just got pissed off because I really liked the story about Pink and Pearl and really wanted to see it continued. I just get so angry when authors delete great stories. If this new turns out like any of Imasuky Lomae's works, then I'm sure it will be a great read. Sorry, please disregard my last comment, and please continue the story, I do look forward to reading it. I'M A BIG FAN!!!

I have to say that this story was pretty good, and very well written. However, it was CRAP compared to the other Pink Version story you wrote! If you want to start over from scratch that is fine, but I don't see the point in discontinuing and deleting a perfectly good story.

How can you say it's crap compared to the other one when this one's only gone on for a single chapter? The plot's barely gotten started, there's been no sex yet, and barely any characters have been introduced. So a story doesn't look as good as a story that had gone on for 13 chapters and had developed itself and its characters when this one's only got a single chapter so far? Well no fucking shit, Sherlock. Maybe you should give it a chance to actually get going before comparing the two. Frankly, I think this one's off to a great start, if for no other reason than the fact that Pink isn't around.