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for Parallel's Playground

by ToreadoreRose

person Inu-Ice-Dragon
schedule September 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Soooo ... Yeah ... Love the story! I was hoping that you would finish this story soon, but I see you haven't updated it since 2007 ... I completely understand I do that as well. But I thought that I would let you know that I would still be interested in a continuation of this story! I can't wait to see how they both react to the bathtub scene later on, especially Sakura, she certainly has been having some wavering emotions! I hope that eventually you do pick this up again!
person eli
schedule January 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
continue continue please sakura and fujitaka l like this couple
person Aiko
schedule December 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Its been a few years since i read this and i was really excited to refind it.
Please write more T^T
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome possum!!!

...Whew...(is it hot in here, or is it just me?)

...I would write something more...but...my mind cannot come up with anything coherent...or anything of the sort...C;(taking a lot of effort just to write this review)

UPDATE!!!

As soon as you can of course...XD
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Simply amazing work! I can't begin to count how many times I've read this fic...and it never gets boring. *grins*

Continue, continue! I'm anxious to know what happens next!

Excellent writing, keep it up. I thought the pairing was odd at first, but I was pleasantly surprised, it's written well, and in a way that works. Not at all out of character, either, which isn't a very easy task.

*puppy dog eyes* Next chapter?
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
....Indescribably deep...
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, I thought you'd given up on this the amount of time it took you to update. Super pleased that you haven't. Chapter 4 was an interesting plot development, can honestly say I did not see that one coming. And Chapter 5...Wow. I enjoyed it a lot, perhaps a little too much considering who it was and how old they were ^_^; Nevertheless, I shall start keeping an eye open for reviews once again as I'm once again in love with this story :)
person Aiko69
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sits with mouth open*..WOW!!!
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First, I have to say I almost didn't click the link to this story...
The pairing and all.
But after giving in to the temptation and reading this, I'm so glad I did.
This fic is, without a doubt, is one of the best, I've ever come across on AFF! The writing depth is simply awesome, the story just sucks you in on an emotional level.
I really hope you continue with this. :O)

Brillent Job!
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was.... hmmmm... Damn Girl that was hot!
though I'm a bit miffed about the evil "another cliffhanger-ish… thing". *jk*

I understand the whole not being to good at the finishing multi-chappy thing. I've been know to do that, lots! (darn that ADhD)
and I had to give this fic a chance... just for the fact I had never seen a FxS either, and I happen to have sitting on my HD a SakuraxTouya oneshot i wrote months ago, I'm just too chicken to post it.;o)
This chapter goes to show you deserve lots and lots of worship/praise! (that and cookies)
Hope you have stress free days, and the itch to write more soon.

Later,
Layne

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