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for Parallel's Playground

by ToreadoreRose

person Aiko69
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~SQUEES again~...i love it...but i dont like the cliff hanging..keep going..PWEESS!!!...^_^
person Aiko69
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~SQUEE!!~ i LOVE it!!...i really like the paring too...i really hope ur going to finish it...
person Teller
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hoooly crap. That was very, VERY well written. o.o

I wish I could write that well. Planning on doing more?
person haesufel
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohohohohhohoho! honestly the father and daughter act grosses me out but...i don't know why the idea of FUJITAKA and SAKURA doing it does not bother me at all. I wanna read them in action! Please update!
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wish there were so many more chapters than just three :(

This is an awesome story you have here my dear. I have to admit, the idea of Sakura and Fujitaka in a physical relationship has always intrigued me, (as has the idea of her being with Touya) but I've never had the inspiration to start writing something of my own and now, you've been oh so lovely and written something to share with us all. And you write so well and realistically too, I adore the way you manage to convey how Sakura is feeling about it all and how she's slowly starting to work out her body.

Yes, so, I'll stop talking now and finish with excellent job, I'm totally enjoying it and I hope to read the next chapter soon :)
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More please? You have no idea how long I've been looking for a FxS fic.
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. I wouldn't mind more. :3

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