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that was awesome. really sweet, too <3

Update. Now.

This story is amazing; you seem to know Matt and Mello's characters extremely well and as such conduct beautifully eloquent scenes even when they act out of character. I nearly cried at some of the scenes. I'm loving the parallelism and contrast between normal-Mello and weak-Mello, and you make it seem possible for the angry firecracker blond to act like a caged animal.

In short: awesome story that needs to be updated by yesterday. Mos'def looking forward to more!

<3 ~ Rory-chan

this story, well... the 5 chapters ive indulged myself with; were simply amazing, the way u captured the moments was bewildering, i kno its hard for a rape victim, even when the offender is put away or killed ect, its so hard for some one to get over the fear, it takes a long time to over come and release those feelings and fears. your story is wellwriten and i might be biased due to being able to identify so well with mello, but its a pretty thought, having someone you love restore your well being. I almost wonder how your so in tune with a victims thoughts and feelings, did you research? or are your own source? plz excuse me for prying i guess vitims of abuse and rape reach out despretly for those who understand the act and vile deads, all my stories here are angsty and dark, i dont think i even have one w/o some form of abuse or rape invovled, but ive strayed far and off topic, thank you for telling the victims side of rape and torture, if more ppl are aware of the pain maybe they can step up and relieve the stress and anger even something as strange as a fictional wqriting can give a form of comfort sometimes, i guess becuase some one like you writes what victims have felt and we know....we are truely NOT ALONE.
thank you very much even if you never realize the fruits of your labors *hugs*
Stormy

cute story i like it

that story was so intense it made me want to cry...

Excellent plot, however the many grammar errors distracted me sometimes. You really need to fix them. If one is to right on a website where adults choose to read and enjoy stories, they need intelligent people to write such things. I doubt they'd want to read a story with so many errors.

Though, that's my critique. =] Think nothing of it. I'm merely choosing to help out. Otherwise, this story is getting somewhere. Keep up the good work, and remember to watch out for any errors before posting.

-Ketsu

I think that the police could find out it was mello 'cause they had to do blood work at the hospital and one of the nurses or doctors noticed that mello came in around the same time that the man was reported murdered. just a thought. i love your fic by the way.

Lookin forward to the next chapter C:

i love this fic, its so different from the other mattxmello's i cant wait to see what mello and matt do next :D

Hey :3

Just wanted to say that I absolutely love this story. :]

You did an awesome job. Seriously, I like love/adore the way you write :D

Keep up the great job!