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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
truly an amazing story; my only qualm being the long period with no updates...
I think i read this story about... 6 months or so ago, and only one(, maybe two,) chapter is new...
So... that being said, i know life can be hectic (i anyone knows that, its me), but i would love you forever i you finished this story <3
~Kai
I think i read this story about... 6 months or so ago, and only one(, maybe two,) chapter is new...
So... that being said, i know life can be hectic (i anyone knows that, its me), but i would love you forever i you finished this story <3
~Kai
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is going great so far. Could you post more and send it to me. Either that or just notify me that you updated. THANKS.
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October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
kaiten demands that you update soon *noddnodd*
Sorry... my bout of 3rd person speaking is over now (i hope...)
But, yeah... you do need to update... maybe with a bit more GP? (drools over GP fictions...) er... yeah... hehheh... ^.^" sorry, my muse has decided that i be random... and i dont have the heart to ignore her...
Sorry... my bout of 3rd person speaking is over now (i hope...)
But, yeah... you do need to update... maybe with a bit more GP? (drools over GP fictions...) er... yeah... hehheh... ^.^" sorry, my muse has decided that i be random... and i dont have the heart to ignore her...
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving this so far and I think the personality change fits Tezuka in daddy mode. Great job!
I think my favorite line in the second chapter was
“Hey, piggy-chan, ojiisan is not going to steal your dinner.”
That was too cute :)
I think my favorite line in the second chapter was
“Hey, piggy-chan, ojiisan is not going to steal your dinner.”
That was too cute :)
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I hate that monkey-man bastard Matsura! He makes me think evil thoughts on ways that Tezuka could torture him! -growls at monkey man-
Well anyway, the last few chapters were great and Hana-chan is just so cute :) I can't wat to see what you do with the next few chapters!
Well anyway, the last few chapters were great and Hana-chan is just so cute :) I can't wat to see what you do with the next few chapters!
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ow im glad that you posted a new chapter. please do it more often xD.
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, so glad you're still going! I really want to see Fuji and Tezuka get together in this fic, I love the angst to death and I'm excited to see how the whole Abusive bf x Fuji thing goes XDDDD (btw this is ychan in case I haven't told you yet - I'm now doing all reviews under new sn)
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, I've just started reading the story today, and I'm already totally addicted to it XXXDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the way you write, and specially how you manage to keep the whole scene flowing constantly, without any jarring breaks or sudden turns. The plot is really interesting, and I love it how you manage to pull out different emtions from me towards both main characters. Specially with Tezuka, I hate him at times and at others I feel like he need someone to hug him and tell him which one is the right choice ^-^!!!!!!!!!!! I know you haven't updated in a while, but I do hope that you have not forgoten about this storie, and I really hope that you continue writing it; I would really love to read the ending.
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
are you really gonna stop continuing this story? it's such a pity then coz it is a beautiful story..
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is an amazing story. really suspenseful and heart-breaking. can't wait for the next chapter!