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for A Beautiful Mistake

by kimonomaker

person ychan
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooo I'm happy to see this story updated, ooo plot villain :D Semi-abusive boyfriend? -eyes sparkle- I love the angst (of course), and everything in Tezuka and Fuji's conversation... That's a lot of baggage. XD And no one knows but them? Hm... wah, I'm looking forward to the reunion! Even though now they've already met. :D
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!

FUJI AND TEZUKA ANGST!!! UPDATE FUCKING DAMNIT!!!

>Esu-chan
person shourin
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
when will you update.. i want to see the continuation of this story~..
hana chan is cute.. i love the way you describe her character.. it highlight her cuteness..
and fuji... ohh dun let me start on fuji...

he is sooooooooooooooooooooooooo lonely.. and heartbroken.. poor creature!!!

tezuka is like.. totally mean.. and if i am fuji.. i'll punch tezuka's jaw so hard all his teeth are dropping.

and set that amy woman in fire!

but she's dead and she gives birth to hana chan.. so...

whatevah.. (no this is not a flame.. ^_^)
person songswifteye
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I remember starting to read this a long time - or what feels like a long time ago. I'm so glad that it's grown since the last time I read it. I think that there were only 2 or 3 chapters. I'm really enjoying it. The characters are believable, if you think in the context of "over a decade in the future." And Hana-chan is terribly endearing. I can't wait until you update.
-Song
person Anon
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Tezuka as a coward who doesn't want to be gay, so he flees his feelings for Fuji. The baby's adorable. Can't wait for the next update.
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How can you leave it like that?? Please update soon!
person ychan
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooo how lovely, I love how it's going so far. Pft, Tezuka that jerk, he better accept Fuji in the end *.* Thank you for writing, this fic is great, please keep up the speedy updates! ^.^
person Anon
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love the story so far. i can't wait to see why they didn't part on good terms. tough i already have an idea.
person catmum56
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Tezuka's home! Hana sounds so cute. I'm looking forward to this story - it's very good.
person catmum56
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I *like* this! A very promising beginning. I'll look forward to reading the upcoming chapters. I wish I could put this on a story-alert email notification. I don't want to miss anything.

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