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October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell. That was amazing! This story is wonderful. It is so clever and well put together. Please, pretty please, more!
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December 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I must confess - I followed this story from its beginning until about Chapter 10. I recently searched for and found it again - alas! unfinished. Sorry to see it no longer updated. I am DYING to know what Akito's nasty plan is.
I'm a huge fan of the anime and manga, and thus a fairly harsh critic of its fan fiction, particularly where any sort of sexuality is involved - and you've really done well with sticking (relatively) within the lines of the original story, and you've stayed true to characterization to boot. It almost feels as though this is the bit they had to cut out of the original manga. Otherwise, they would've had to market to a completely different demographic.
All right, enough rambling and accolades. Though, I really don't see how you can get enough for this story. Do you plan to continue? I really hope you do. I'll be on the edge of my seat waiting for each new installment should you continue.
Let me know.
Your [somewhat] loyal follower and fan,
Emilie
I'm a huge fan of the anime and manga, and thus a fairly harsh critic of its fan fiction, particularly where any sort of sexuality is involved - and you've really done well with sticking (relatively) within the lines of the original story, and you've stayed true to characterization to boot. It almost feels as though this is the bit they had to cut out of the original manga. Otherwise, they would've had to market to a completely different demographic.
All right, enough rambling and accolades. Though, I really don't see how you can get enough for this story. Do you plan to continue? I really hope you do. I'll be on the edge of my seat waiting for each new installment should you continue.
Let me know.
Your [somewhat] loyal follower and fan,
Emilie
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"In fact, my writing of this story is distracting me from my work and potentially ruining my chances of a raise"
I'm really sorry.I will not longer ask you to update.To write fiction should be an hobby and fun for you,and not ruined your career.
I see you have posted new chapters,thank you for that!
I'm really sorry.I will not longer ask you to update.To write fiction should be an hobby and fun for you,and not ruined your career.
I see you have posted new chapters,thank you for that!
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"It took a whole person with another whole person to make a whole relationship" the problem of the Sohma is that they are a person+ an animal...XD
I think that Akito hasn't wanted that Shigure does what she said...I'm really looking forward the next Aki appearance...
Tohru's trouble ar interesting,she and Kyo are adorable together.
Your Shigure is amazing!
I think that Akito hasn't wanted that Shigure does what she said...I'm really looking forward the next Aki appearance...
Tohru's trouble ar interesting,she and Kyo are adorable together.
Your Shigure is amazing!
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a threesome,the few furuba threesome I've read were Tohru+Hatori+or Ayame or Shigure or Tohru+Yuki+Kyo...never a younger one with a mature man...
Shigure and Kyo ally or even more?
(about the lemon...I've already wrote that you write the best lemon I've ever read,this is the simple true)
Shigure and Kyo ally or even more?
(about the lemon...I've already wrote that you write the best lemon I've ever read,this is the simple true)
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yuhu! a new chapter!
Shigure is very serious and elaborate about his task!
"...scrubbing down her long lean legs..." she is shorter than 1,60 m,her legs aren't that long XD (I'm exactly that short!)
He is the dog,that's why he is so anal focused?
"...It was dirty down there, but they were in the shower, so they could wash everything clean after..." This IS Tohru! I bet she would think something like this,your character aren't OCC.
"...with Akito as his wife, Tohru as his second wife, and Kyou as his... um. Fellow husband?..." a little greedy don't you think?
But I think Shigure wants his family.
"...he got to stay by Akito 'til she died..." I suppose,you use the anime version of the curse...Why?I don't want that Akito dies young...
Shigure is very serious and elaborate about his task!
"...scrubbing down her long lean legs..." she is shorter than 1,60 m,her legs aren't that long XD (I'm exactly that short!)
He is the dog,that's why he is so anal focused?
"...It was dirty down there, but they were in the shower, so they could wash everything clean after..." This IS Tohru! I bet she would think something like this,your character aren't OCC.
"...with Akito as his wife, Tohru as his second wife, and Kyou as his... um. Fellow husband?..." a little greedy don't you think?
But I think Shigure wants his family.
"...he got to stay by Akito 'til she died..." I suppose,you use the anime version of the curse...Why?I don't want that Akito dies young...
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor Hatori!
shouldn't Tohru feel a little sore,after this much sex?
"Shigure will have Akito again. And he'll love her, and they'll be happy"... or Akito will have the proof that Shigure is a sexmaniac who sleeps with every woman and she will stay with the faithful Kureno...
"...Tohru into a bitch in heat is not exactly the easiest of tasks..." this is a lie!
like i said before,I do like this fiction,but I understand if you can't continued with this.
thank you
shouldn't Tohru feel a little sore,after this much sex?
"Shigure will have Akito again. And he'll love her, and they'll be happy"... or Akito will have the proof that Shigure is a sexmaniac who sleeps with every woman and she will stay with the faithful Kureno...
"...Tohru into a bitch in heat is not exactly the easiest of tasks..." this is a lie!
like i said before,I do like this fiction,but I understand if you can't continued with this.
thank you
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you must write more! and soon!! Please... TTnTT
It is lovely and I can't stop reading it. I'm excited!
Baka-chan
It is lovely and I can't stop reading it. I'm excited!
Baka-chan
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was nice and very well written!I'm happy about Tohru and Kyou first time!I guess I'm romantic...but i know what happened next!
(i found your story at furuba lemon!)great!
(i found your story at furuba lemon!)great!
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The beginning of the Shigure/Kyou alliance?
I must say you not only write the best lemon/lime I've ever read (together with Miu Vampire princess),you can also write clever,good dialoges!keep at it!
I must say you not only write the best lemon/lime I've ever read (together with Miu Vampire princess),you can also write clever,good dialoges!keep at it!