rate_review Reviews

That was an awesome story my friend. I was a bit hesitant at first because I don't like reading about 'rape' but it turned out great in the end. You did justice to Luffy's character and Nami was epic too. LuNa forever!!

it was a good story, but it would have been easier to follow if every single sentence was not a paragraph! i liked it tho. and you characterized luffy well

A LuNa! ALRIGHT! I'm a ZoLu writer, but I do LOVE a good Luffy/Nami fic. They're an awesome couple, I think. Luffy over Sanji any day, right? :) Very well written. you could use a little paragraphing instruction, but on the whole it had a plot and was realistic, i felt. You spent time on it, obviously. Good job!

That was a lot better than mine! I especially liked the part how you involved the rest of the crew in it, especially near the end when they told Luffy the reasons why they couldn't sleep lol! To be honest, lemons are really nice but I prefer a lemon in a story rather than PWP-wise. I just..don't like that, it's pointless but if people write it then hey, let them!

nice lemon. sweet oneshot hope to see another one. Are you the person that wrote 'Uneventful Dinner' on fanfiction.net. If you are would you mind, and I know that I already asked this, but could you write a Lemon version of it. It was really Funny humor fic but I still belive that it had the perfict plote for a smute fic.