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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
first of all, i LOVE this story, but there is a few things you could fix... just slight grammar and spelling problems as well as you have ch 8 & ch 7 switched, and ch 7 isnt showing up (only the disclaimer and author's notes) so im a little lost... {mainly fuji staying at a hotel... that messed me up a bit...}
Id love for you to continue this story and, in doing so, get better with grammar and the like by editing and rereading your work.
Id love for you to continue this story and, in doing so, get better with grammar and the like by editing and rereading your work.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch 8 is good but what happened to chapter 7? I want to know how they got from being at the resturaunt and Fuji leaving then suddenly they are now meeting at a new resturaunt and all is OK with Fuji and Tezuka? What happened inbetween?
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still no chapter 7 -cries- Hm, maybe there's an html code or something that is causing the text to disappear? Do you have any characters at the beginning? Try copying all the text into note pad and deleting any symbols, especially '>' this and '<' this.
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There's still no Chapter 7 ... (it looks like it's not loading correctly) -cries- Nyaa I really want to read it :3 All Aff.net has for chapter 7 is the summary.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, we're waiting for new chapter!!! Dont let it hang like that ^^".
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hunyaaa~ i still can't see the story~ *cries*
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch 7/ I would like to review ch 7 but it it not posted, just the disclaimer. I hope you post it becuase I did want to see more on this story.
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
na ah. nothing happen so far.
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you know, getting all excited just to read...
"Title : To crack a nut ( Chapter 7 )
Disclaimer : I’m just playing with them for a bit. They do not belong to me and I do not make any money out of this or them. This is written for pure entertaining and enjoyment purposes.
Tezuka’s point of view.
Authors note : I’m sorry if my writing style has changed a little. It tends to happen to stories that go on hiatus for long periods of time."
only is kinda dissapointing you know...
*cries silently in one corner*
"Title : To crack a nut ( Chapter 7 )
Disclaimer : I’m just playing with them for a bit. They do not belong to me and I do not make any money out of this or them. This is written for pure entertaining and enjoyment purposes.
Tezuka’s point of view.
Authors note : I’m sorry if my writing style has changed a little. It tends to happen to stories that go on hiatus for long periods of time."
only is kinda dissapointing you know...
*cries silently in one corner*
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What's up w/ the 4 chapter 7s?
Still, I love this fanfic very much! ^^
Please edit the chapter 7s and update please! ^^
Still, I love this fanfic very much! ^^
Please edit the chapter 7s and update please! ^^