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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm too impatient for the sequel!!
Dramatic and marvelous story!!
Dramatic and marvelous story!!
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Will there be any more of this?
It's been rather more than a month since you (supposedly) got a new computer....so yeah.
Other than that, down to an actual review? You're doing pretty good, I'd continue it, if I were you, characterizations were good, etc etc...Eheh. >_>
It's been rather more than a month since you (supposedly) got a new computer....so yeah.
Other than that, down to an actual review? You're doing pretty good, I'd continue it, if I were you, characterizations were good, etc etc...Eheh. >_>
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey guys, just an FYI: My computer, AKA My main vessel for writing, was recently stolen. Sucks for me, I know. What sucks for you is, until I get a new one (Shouldn't be more than a month, hopefully) there's really no way for me to write new chapters (luckily, all the other stuff I'd written was backed up here). So yeah, don't expect any new chapters for a while. I'm so sorry, you have no idea how much I hate this situation...
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August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
alright a sequel. i'm lookin forwrd to this.
-descendant of the shadows-
Twisteddarkness
-descendant of the shadows-
Twisteddarkness
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it, the story was engaging and interesting. Your spelling and grammar is very good as well.
About the only suggestion I have is that it seemed a bit long. I would have split it into two chapters.
About the only suggestion I have is that it seemed a bit long. I would have split it into two chapters.