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for The Vampire

by GreyPenInk

schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting :) Normally I won't go near vampire fictions - I find them too cliche and one much the same as the other - But I'm quite glad I read this. There were some rather amusing moments scattered throughout which helped lighten a darker subject (I'm always for unnessesary humour regardless...), nicely done sex-scene for your first and although I understood the purpose of the breakers between sexual content, I found them to be a little distracting and they seemed to interrupt the flow of text. But that's just me :) I'm sure there was a whole horde of other people that appreciated the warning!

I liked the bit of plot you also worked in there too. It was nicely spaced through the story and you didn't just spam the facts at the start and let people wade through it - everything was at a nice, easy pace to absorb. I liked the mention of Mikami and there were a few lines through that were just brilliant and beautifully written! All in all, a good story! :D Well done!
person Anon
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I fully agree that there should be more Death Note vampire fics. And wow, this was hot. Loved it. Heh, I'd like to see one where Raito is the vampire and that's how he kills, instead of the Death Note. ...Hm... Maybe I could write it... Okay well getting back on topic this was a wonderful read. Good job and thanks for writing.

Jade
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I love this vampire fic.
=)
person voyuerer
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome au, loved L as a vamp. The end was great. I just loved the whole feel of the story. And thanks for taking Misa out of the picture.
person kallipso
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story. I love the interaction between the characters.
person Jade
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"little orgasm button"...XD
person yuneek
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! loved it loved it loved it!! The whole friends to lovers thing. And I loved how you didn't have Light just cave in the first time L was trying to seduce him (all too common in most stories) and he actually stuck to his guns XD Well I really really would love to see a sequel, but if you don't want to that's fine :D thank you so much for this amazing read!
person Mino
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, death note did need a vampire story, and a good one it was.
I really enjoyed the story, it wasn't a predictable one, which is always good.
*throws you magic cookie* keep up the good work :D
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story!
person Alexandra
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Totally loved it! Very interesting, really. Poor L, being blackmailed like this... hehe

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