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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that's the end? oh well, it did end in a good spot, I just figured that you would add maybe one more chapter about how Eiri and Yuki formed such a relationship. I felt like that last chapter, even though I know it was hard to write, was so rushed. but the beggining was supurb, and I liked reading about Eiri's school life, glad that one teacher got sacked, but he didn't have to fight Eiri for it, meanie. I hope you keep up with what your good at. If you have a mailing list I'd love to be on it.
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story! It was great seeing him gain currage to protect his sibbling. I also loved the school scenes. I did however, find the end to be very sad.
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20--- poor Eiri- he can't trust anyone completely. I wish he had finally told Tohma what happened- after the hospital visit, but that's Eiri.... Please continue!
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
19 great chapters... and I can't wait to see what happens to a certain math teacher next... Poor Eiri, but those remedial classes did seem to be helping.... Please continue- soon!
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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE :D
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This really good. I feel sorry for Eiri- he can't help it if he whistles with a tooth missing- I agree= DS!!!
Please continue.
Please continue.
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice light chapter #16... please continue...
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon, the wait is killing me!!!! im really loving this story.
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good stuff, i like the short chapters. This is almost perfect with how the series continues, it's a good 'prequel' to where the series starts off in new york. I haven't read the manga, but I am working on it, but I think i still have a while to go until I get to the nyc part.
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 15- excellent- keep it coming, please! So far this arc is doing quite well.