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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really think that chapter 14 is well written. I don't understand why you are unhappy with the say the story is going- the last 3 chapters were needed and made perfect sense. Please continue on. I await chapter 15
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13- excellent- simple eloquent but excellent. I am glad the Eiri's father had the courage to defend his son in court!!! Now- onward and upward!
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent and yes still reading
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent-- captivating... can't wait for next chapter- is 13 going to be an unlucky number for Eiri?
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September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is very interesting though i read it because the synopsis says that it is complete--obviously it isnt looking forward to the next chapter
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September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is getting good.. Can't wait to see what happens once Eiri gets his mother into court!!
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually, the police scene isn't that far fetched... It frequently goes down like that IRL (personal experience as former law enforcement person). I found it a really good chapter and hope to see more soon. And yes, police officers can be compassionate towards victims, especially children. I often wondered why the mother was not in the anime/manga... This could explain it... please write more.
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 9... I don't find that Tatsuha is OOC... Actually, he was as I would have expected, seeing how close the two brothers have been the entire story. And it's about time Eiri stood up to his mother, too bad it was only to protect his brother and not himself. Please continue.. this is great!
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I always wondered what would cause Tohma to take Eiri to the states and why his parents would let that happen. This is probably the most excellent pre-quel to the Gravitation series I have ever read. It makes sense, is sensitive and I can't wait to see where it goes from here. Thanks for writing!
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter 7 is so sad, and yet, needed to be done. Poor Eiri.. so... hurry with Chapter 8, please.