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August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW that vision was to do with the war between Shirohige and the Marines (not certain of the Japanese spelling for Marines so left it in English)!
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November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Uwaaah! Such a good story! I'm so glad I stumbled across a post in a livejournal group where somebody recommended it to someone else... and I randomly started reading it and wah I want more! I can't wait to read the sequel!
I'm very glad that Chopper's one of my least favorite characters, though, because you really trashed his reputation in this.
I really liked that it wasn't Luffy's fault that he consumed a lethal dose of Rumbleballs, even though it's something Luffy would easily be believed to just stumble across and toss into his mouth. I can't describe why, but I liked that this whole thing wasn't his fault. And I liked how you started incorporating foreshadowing of things that happen at a later point in the official series.
That bit about the man-eating plants and the baron and the goat though? What was that from? I've read/watched everything (except some filler) and I don't remember anything like that. Is that from one of your other fics?
Anyway I'm sad now 'cause I spent my entire evening at home reading the last 6 or 8 chapters and now I don't have any to read tomorrow at work! *cries* Oh write more!
Oh wait... You probably have! Write more anyway, it won't be long before I catch up ^_^
I'm very glad that Chopper's one of my least favorite characters, though, because you really trashed his reputation in this.
I really liked that it wasn't Luffy's fault that he consumed a lethal dose of Rumbleballs, even though it's something Luffy would easily be believed to just stumble across and toss into his mouth. I can't describe why, but I liked that this whole thing wasn't his fault. And I liked how you started incorporating foreshadowing of things that happen at a later point in the official series.
That bit about the man-eating plants and the baron and the goat though? What was that from? I've read/watched everything (except some filler) and I don't remember anything like that. Is that from one of your other fics?
Anyway I'm sad now 'cause I spent my entire evening at home reading the last 6 or 8 chapters and now I don't have any to read tomorrow at work! *cries* Oh write more!
Oh wait... You probably have! Write more anyway, it won't be long before I catch up ^_^
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow you never sease to amaze me. this story was really great. you need to keep writing. I'll be waiting on that sequel.
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwe! so cute. I loved this story. Can't wait for the sequel.
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Treestar! I've read your stuff on Fanfiction.net but I like it better here. Anyway, this story was amazing! I can't wait to read the sequel! I hope you write it really soon! Thank you for posting this!
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great story!!! When can I expect to see the sequel? I really would like to know what happens next, so please continue the story!!!
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh oh oh wow. I'll admit i'd skipped over this story a couple of time because i thought a shrunk luffy would be meh but i have to admit this was amazing and i'm glad i finally gave it the chance it more than deserved. I'm definantly reading the next.
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. just wow. I started reading the first chapter and just had to sit down and read all that you'd written. I LOVE it!! The characters are still so completely in character but more in depth.
The relationship between Luffy and Zoro was just so sweet. There were so many times when I was reading that my heart would just ache. (I'm an uncureable romantic). it was great seeing the emotional side of Zoro and a deeper side to Luffy. ( because as good as One Piece is, Luffy comes off as a bit two-dimensional. still more depth than a one-dimensional character but still missing something. hopefully we'll find out more soon)
Any way.....yes, i LOVED the story. I laughed a lot, awwww-ed lot and drooled quite a bit. ( i mean, Zoro working out. -dreamy eyed gaze- ) Luffy was just so CUTE all chibi-like. And so was Zoro taking care of Luffy! X3
I can't wait for the ending!
Nice job!
The relationship between Luffy and Zoro was just so sweet. There were so many times when I was reading that my heart would just ache. (I'm an uncureable romantic). it was great seeing the emotional side of Zoro and a deeper side to Luffy. ( because as good as One Piece is, Luffy comes off as a bit two-dimensional. still more depth than a one-dimensional character but still missing something. hopefully we'll find out more soon)
Any way.....yes, i LOVED the story. I laughed a lot, awwww-ed lot and drooled quite a bit. ( i mean, Zoro working out. -dreamy eyed gaze- ) Luffy was just so CUTE all chibi-like. And so was Zoro taking care of Luffy! X3
I can't wait for the ending!
Nice job!
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is this it?!!!
whta about the crew?!
What about Zoro?!!!!!
damn it i want more!
please?
whta about the crew?!
What about Zoro?!!!!!
damn it i want more!
please?
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WoW that was amazing,I was so scared we were going to lose Loofy. I can't wait to see what happens next. I think Zoro will finally be able to tell the captain how he feel and not be stopped. It would be great if they got together.