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NOOOOO!!!! YA CANT KILL HIM!!!!....that would suck!!!(stayed up for three hours reading entire thing)

Oh, no you don't fix it! Fix it and supply lemon to apologize for killing, however briefly, Luffy!

I stumbles across this series not so long ago,and fall in love with the unquie story. I love it, it show the many different side of Luffy that we rarely see, then again pills does mess with you. But I love it, and please keep me update when a new chapter come out, it just keep getting better and better!

Aaaaaaaaaaaw, c'mon, you gotta write the next chapter!! T-T

Just dropping a quick review here cuz I couldn't resist the call of porn XD

I agree, I like the FF version better because it's more censored, but despite that, I really liked this version as well. You were able to keep the scene going without hitch and didn't get caught up on all the smutty details that would have slowed things down.

...And that's all I really have to say at the moment XD I still need to REVIEW all the chapters (I'm like...what? 6 chapters behind now?) and respond to your email... I'll do that when I'm not so busy ^_^

Hey! I love your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! could you sent me an @mail when you've written the next part? I don't want to miss a thing! ^__^ and I like Luffy in here because his much smarter than he seams and he confuses Zoro most of the time! So I hope you will update in a short time :)

Okay, I am ALMOST all the way through this, chapter 27- and I just want to tell you how much I love it. I've been reading this story before bed (often until three or four in the morning) for a couple of days now, and I only do that because I LIKE it. You've got a great feel for human behavior and for the chaos of One Piece, and it shows. You're doing a really great job with this, and I'll always be looking for updates. ^^

Now... on to chapter 28. ♥

Gyuh.
Luffy is amazing. He's just... amazing. Luffy is ALWAYS amazing, it is canon for Luffy to be amazing... but STILL.
Excellent, excellent job. I heard a rumor in the comments that this is the end, in which case I will probably have to pace around my yard at two in the morning talking to myself, several nights in a row, to work this out for myself, because... DAMN.
Only very special stories draw me in so completely like this, make me a PART of them until I half-expect to see my name come up in text. I laughed through nearly this whole thing, and melted, and sighed... Like I said in the other comment, you have a GREAT hand for human emotion, and you should always keep going, wherever it takes you.

Thank you, for sharing this with the rest of us. ♥

That's not the end, is it? (pouts) as Luffy would say, MORE!!! It's really well written and i like the scenario. You're very talented. ^__^

Finally! Now, what is next, and when is it coming?