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That was really great! Now, I really couldn't say it was hot, seeing as how I'm a girl... who like girls... and generally finds the concept of that thing between a man's legs disgusting, but I really enjoyed reading this (even the yaoi). I especially liked your writing style, because really, it's so hard to find fanfiction writers with a good grasp of grammar. I was quite suprised when I read it and found I wasn't disgusted by numerous run-ons, quotations in the wrong places, and a plethora of sentence fragments. So keep going with the story, because really, who doesn't enjoy a few choice gerunds in the middle of spontaneous sex.

WOW, I'd love to see more stories of this pairing!! It's a shame there isn't that much fanfiction of, couse it's one of my favorites anime series.
And Tooru and Juchiro are just meant to be together ;D

Please write more..

All i can say is you better freaking update. :D Great so far. And seems to me Yuujirio already has the post filled as seme.

Oh wow. This was absolutely fantastic. Wish I had found it sooner (since I'd never heard of Princess/Princess even when you mentioned it in your profile it didn't dawn on me to look up under the stories categories - I thought it was a new story you were working on called princess/princess - I'm such an idiot). This is wonderful and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Now I'll have to go and read up on this fandom as well since I know nothing about it.

This is fabulous! A wonderful read, and I really do hope you plan to continue. Very well written, and the description and similies are just delicious.

OMG that was awesome! I'd love a seme Yuujirou! Haha, it seems to me that Tooru's very erm... naivety and vulnerableness makes him a more fitting uke than Yuujirou's cunning nature... and we all saw how he took the initiative to kiss Tooru anyway.. teehee, I love it.. awesome and hot! Update soon! Lemme know if you're updating!

SWEET MOTHER!! That was amazing!!!!!!! *pounds on table* MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!!!!!! I hope your computer problems get better. I'll take this time to read all of your non-naruto works. I didn't even know you had any. You are just so wonderful!

Yesss we have more óf this
*whimpers*
Both scences were hot.
I like the semeish Yuujirou.
I also like how while Tooru liked being dominated he is just not accepting it easily that he could like being the uke.

Feels very realistic. How he doesn't want to admit he liked being dominated because this to a teenaged boy would mean he is not masculine enough in their narrow worldview. Can't wait to see how you handle the future developements and interactions. MORE MORE MORE!!!

annakas

This has to be the most original, most erotic, and most beautiful yaoi story that I've ever have the joy of reading.

this was hot! i´d like to see tooru being uke... please update soon