rate_review Reviews

great story!!! write more :)

Doesn't it totally suck ass that akito turned out to be a woman? If he had stayed male, this story would have totally rocked socks... it still does! Great work.

OMG!! That was sooo good!! I'm so happy and giddy now! Thank you soo much for writing this awesome story!

I think my favorite part of this story was when Yuki confessed his love for Akito and Akito was like 'I'm not dieing. It's just a cold.' and they had a moment! XD Beautiful Moment!!!

Hope your write more in the future!!

this was very good and the first furuba fic i have read. A point of improvement maybe would be to have the tohru/akito confrontation and then Akito coudl have gone to the dark room and found yuki. I think it would have made him feel really guilty and he'd have to make it up to yuki! >< (not to mention the added angst bonus!) But this was well written and gripping. Perhaps you could space out your text to make it easier to read? Keep up the good work with anything else you write, I'd definitely go and have a look! ^_^