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*groans* *glances around and grabs Schuldig* He's after your baby girl. *shoves him towards Cain* Go. Play. *eyes Hugh* Stick close to her if you want a chance.

*pets Abel* poor boy. I hope they can fix you enough. Maybe not completely, but enough.

*applauds* Beautiful as always* grins*

I'm a tad confused; I recognize the characters from Yami no Matsuei (and Trinity Blood, of course), but I'm at a loss for everyone else. What other series does this story contain, so I can follow the fic better?

May I also make a humble suggestion of page breaks for the scene changes? n_n; I'm sorry, I'm just having a little trouble figuring out where one scene ends and the next takes over. Not a lot of trouble, but enough that the story's flow is compromised.

You have a very realistic writing style, and a great use of imagery. I'd love to read more of this one, if it's still in progress.

awesome chapter. haven't been around here for awhile so good to see this story is still going! i hope someone is very rich so they can pay Abel's therapy bills lol! ^_^

ut oh... I don't think I like where cain's mind is going....

*cackles* Love Morrigan though. She hates the pomp and circumstance as much as Blaze does. But I bet she's gonna love Abel to death.....

lol no, i think it would take a lot to beat Dietrich down.

hopefully Abel won't pass out during any ceremonies. ^_^

*crawls out of her hole and dusts herself off* 'allo, govna. I really wish I could get my hands on a pic of Abel with his hair all done up and whatnot. Mmmm... pretty. And poor Hugue... well, if circe won't have him, I will! :D Gonna hope over and read your OF. Oh, and as requested, I have posted. I'm working on the chapter for NFWYB.

*cackles* poor Abel. Two identical guys want him *and* he's a prince. It's gonna be interesting to see what happens next.

lol poor Hugue getting all tormented by Dietrich.

hmmm things are getting more interesting with Tres. hope to find more revealed soon.

looking forward to more involvement with Abel. ^_^

*grins* Yeah and yet I'm really hoping you toss the three of 'em together. *shrugs* Sure, I'd be willing to read some Original Fiction by you.

*grins* Watari's absolutely confused how Tres can be living yet an android as well, Circe just needs to be hugged desperately by Hughe, and Deitrich needs another lesson at Taka's hands.....

*keen whine* Sorry about not updating... What can I say? Bulletproof loneliness... On to the good stuff. VERY interesting chapter. Poor Cain, always wanting what he has no hope of getting. Or does he have hope? Suppose I'll have to stay tuned, eh? I'm gonna go try writing, just for you. Wish me luck!